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bouncemonster
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 10:36 am     Reply with quote
I had posted a picture here some time ago. Then didn't for some time. Then did the same thing again. And then people didn't give much of an ass, so I came back from the dead to show you a picture of a berry, berry sneaky man.

Yes, I like that, it's actually better than the first one of this I posted up. I made this on Painter, and then left it to rot, then fixed it up with Open Canvas.
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Boom! Boom! Jason Yoong!
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Fate
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 12:24 pm     Reply with quote
You went through all the trouble of coming back from dead to show us that? Aww, you really shouldn't have.

Don't know what the hell is going on, you should make the background simpler so that it's less crappy to look at(for my lack of vocabulary) and make the foreground stand out more from the background. you might wanna work on your use of colors cause the man seriously needs to get himself some nice suit to make him look sane.
Plus the shadows on the man's suit is all wrong and I know you have tablet now so try cleaning up the lines a bit more.

Blah blah blah, lots to work on here, keep it up man.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 9:11 pm     Reply with quote
Well, I guess you're right, but you must remember. Do like this = DANCE!!! BOOM! BLAH! BUP! BA! BUM! BUM! BA!
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 9:25 pm     Reply with quote
I really like your picture, great colors, and a pretty damn cool idea. I think you did very well over all.

But "less crappy?" How about better defined, or more refined, or tighten it up a bit in the background, or distinguish the shapes more, but less crappy? Jesus...

Anyway, love the suit, love the use of shadow, and yeah, go ahead and define the background a bit more, maybe even ditch it all together just to push the foreground even more, that's just me though. Again, really nice work.
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 24, 2002 7:23 am     Reply with quote
Thank you berry, berry much.
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