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MarshallX
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 Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 6:47 am |
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Just a charcoal singer I did for school, postin for the hell of it. It was a freakin hard pose to do, things such as his hands and right foot are kinda messed, but oh well...lol...C&C if you like...
BTW>>>> I had to merge 2 images together and I did a bad job of it cuz I don't really care, so no worries about that...sorry about the image size also
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JProvost
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| Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 8:56 am |
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Thought I'd point out a few things I saw...
His legs seem to be dwarfed by his upper body. His hips should be at least as wide as his torso, right now they're even with the abdomen.
The thumb on his left hand seems to be bending back unnaturally far.
It looks really bad to draw in each tooth on portraits. It sort of looks like he has a pack of chicklets in his mouth or something. Rather that draw each tooth in black and highlight them individually, it probably would have been better to draw them all as one and more subtly highlight them.
Not bad though. |
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MarshallX
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| Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 8:58 am |
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Bah. I didn't notice, the teeth aren't like that, the scanner made the lines alot larger than they actualy are.
The hand I had alot of trouble with, i think i redrew it about 12 times. |
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edible snowman
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| Posted: Sun Jul 21, 2002 9:37 am |
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| his right bicep looks like a twizzler. |
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