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cptoonz member
Member # Joined: 22 Mar 2001 Posts: 243 Location: CO
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Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 7:15 am |
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a little something I've been working on, gotten good C&C elsewhere, but since I get something completely different everywhere I post, I would appreciate any and all C&C, thank you:
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the_monkey member
Member # Joined: 20 May 2000 Posts: 688 Location: BC, Canada
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Posted: Sat Jul 13, 2002 11:18 pm |
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i dont know why this is at the bottom of the page. i think its great.
although the background could use the same careful rendering as the figure got. |
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zak member
Member # Joined: 08 May 2002 Posts: 496 Location: i dont remember
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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2002 12:54 am |
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looks good, i like the shoes. a nice concept i respect you for that, cos i cant do any concept stuffs ^__^ |
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SG junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Jul 2002 Posts: 28
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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2002 3:12 am |
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I like the armor! ^_^ I would only suggest to put some more detail in the face, maybe make the eyes fuller. ^^ |
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Ian Jones member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 1114 Location: Brisbane, QLD, Australia.
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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2002 4:27 am |
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Nice concept, the drawing is pretty solid too, except for the face. Work on your rendering and this is a real winner!
It needs a solid base to stand on. At the moment it is just floating. Add some shadow under the feet. Also try a more dynamic lightsource and concentrate on emphasizing your design by characterising the armour even more with a strong emphasis on texture, colour, maybe shiny? matte? what is it? help the viewer get a stronger idea by givng us some more visual clues with your armour and what is is made of.
Hope that helps. |
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cptoonz member
Member # Joined: 22 Mar 2001 Posts: 243 Location: CO
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Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2002 5:22 am |
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thanks monkey, I appreciate the C&C and the post it looks like I am going to revisit this piece, so I will spend a little more time on the BG! thanks again
thanks, zak...well I'll tell you, if I can do it anyone can I appreciate the comps!
SG, thank you kindly, yes, some more face work is on the list! Thanks for the C&C!
Hi Ian, I appreciate the C&C! Got it, yes rendering is one of my week points..I'll work on this. Thank you ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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