[Man With No Name]

Did this for a friends zine...



Thanks for looking.

Curt P.

[gigatron]

Interesting style, heh she's got tight breasts

[nukee3]

Hey man, good stuff here. I hope you don't mind but I did some work on your image because I thought it could be just so much better with a little help. Yor work is good, but you have to start thinking about your edges and highlights. I noticed that all your edges in your image were sharp. Learn to use both soft and sharp edges to define depth and composition. Alot of illustrators neglect this. Also you seem to be timid about placing highlights. Highlights a very useful for giving your image that little extra kick, don't be afraid to use them. One last thing, take into consideration where you'll be placing the detail within the image. In this case you want the deatl to be in the face, breasts, and frontal wings, this goes hand in hand with soft and hard edges. Hope this helps, keep it up man

[nukee3]

dang man, I just checked out your page and I honestly feel like I opened up my yap before I knew who I was talking to. You could school me in a thing or two about construction. You're probably thinking "who the hell does this punk think he is, he can't even draw yo!"

I'm gonna go away and practice now.

[Novacaptain]

Those breasts are nice...anatomically bizarre but still nice (soccer-inspired?).

The round face doesn't seem to match the muscular body too well.

[zak]

sorry im just passing some time, hope you dont mind. added some colour variation. also, you gotta work on that bg. i just went crazy.

[Man With No Name]

Gigatron... yep. brestesses are nice Actually modeled this off one of them victoria secret models.... which might explain em'

Nukee3... Any critique is a good critique. I totaly agree that I am a little too anal retentive in my artwork. Every time I try to loosen up, it just gets worse. I should try sketching more again and not worry about the finished piece... You went to my sight? And you liked it? .... Thanks! I was actually going to get rid of all that stuff... some of it's really embarrising.

novacaptain... Nope.. inspired by a swimsuit model. The face got a little strange when I increased the eyes original size by double. (I wanted it to look more like the old J. Scott Campbell Fairchild, classic stuff.) That's most likely what caused all of the trouble with the face.

zak... hmmm. Grass? Didn't the Halo at least tip you off? Guess I should have put more time in the wings...

Curt P.

[Novacaptain]

zak, hehe crazy would be a pretty good word for it...i believe those were supposed to be wings.

[zak]

whoops. im sooo embarrased. they looked like mouyntains to me, maybe cos of the brown.