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Dennis Sedov junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Dec 2001 Posts: 23 Location: US, Santa Barbara
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 2:21 am |
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Here is something I've been working on for the past... well 2-3 weeks. Flying cars and people are comming up!
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ceenda member
Member # Joined: 27 Jun 2000 Posts: 2030
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 3:34 am |
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Nice work!
A number of crits:
A) There's not much to hint that the scene is essentially Muscovian or even Russian. Could be Paris, Ontario, Hull...
B) I think there needs to be a focus. You mentioned adding in people and vehicles. This is good, as it should give the pic a bit more 'ooomph'.
C) The street corner on the left at the top of the pic screams "BUMP MAPPINGGGGGGGG". Perhaps tone it down a bit?
Very cool though, I like the way you haven't gone for the cliche'd Blade Runner effect with dark skies and chimneys etc. |
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Sumaleth Administrator
Member # Joined: 30 Oct 1999 Posts: 2898 Location: Australia
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 8:57 am |
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Simple but very effective. I really dig the lighting and readering of it.
He's right about the obvious bump map up top/left though. It's mainly the heavy phong highlight that does it.
Not that you'd notice if there was other stuff in the scene. Looking forward to seeing the next version. |
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Sedone member
Member # Joined: 11 May 2000 Posts: 455 Location: United States
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Posted: Wed Jun 26, 2002 11:48 pm |
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Hey, you actually had me fooled for a second. I thought it was a photo-manip until I read the comments. Great mood in this picture. I can't wait to see how it looks after you've populated it. |
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