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neff · Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:44 am

Finished today, hope you enjoy it,
C&C are welcome!

Dan · Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 7:36 pm

Did you read the book by David Brin (dunno how to spell his name) But it's an excellend book. Much better than the movie although that's not really saying that much.

Basement bound · Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 10:27 pm

From the looks of it the dogs in the future are a much bigger problem then they are now a days.

Nice concept.

Awetopsy · Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 11:08 pm

definately Kevin costner..

sorry..

(Ive never actually seen the movie)

actually its pretty good. I like it. I think the anatomy needs work but overall a pretty good image.

neff · Posted: Fri Jun 21, 2002 11:12 pm

Thank you, I know of my problems with anatomy

But, hey i'am learning ;-)

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neff · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 2:17 am

Good idea

Poor doggy
I'd like to show the lineart,
could someone tell me the
anatomic problems?

oDD · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 6:09 am

his feet are too short.

i like the picture very much, a lot of details thats good too =]

Beowulfthefallen · member Member # Joined: 06 Jan 2002 Posts: 147

His right hand looks awkward. The lower bone in his leg is too short and bends really really wierdly, and his feet are way too small for his body proportions :O. that's about all I see though.

Coaster · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 9:58 am

Postman?
What about e-mail...

Winged Monkey · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 10:49 am

I'd like to see the colours desaturated some...

WM

elam · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 12:58 pm

Where's the segway?

His right leg look like his left.
Other than that, nice picture.

[ June 22, 2002: Message edited by: elam ]

neff · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 5:58 pm

his right leg looks like his left one?
uhm okay masters of art ;-)
Next time i'll paint them different

Ian Jones · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 6:15 pm

I think one of the most important things, disregarding the actual anatomy, would have to be the physical balance of this pose. He looks like he is going to fall over atm. This also make him look a little bit stiff. I would try and put him in a more relaxed pose, make him slouch a bit, hips forward.. etc. You can figure that out by posing in front of a mirror.

Other than that, you did a pretty good job, lots of detail!

Hope that helps.

Ravaran · Posted: Sat Jun 22, 2002 8:39 pm

Neat. Nothing else to critique besides what everyone else has. Just thought I'd say that he reminds me of Cid from FFVII... Even has a cigarette! Cool. Take it easy.

neff · Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2002 3:57 am

Thank you a lot for your constructive critics