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sw@T
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 Posted: Sat Jun 15, 2002 8:43 pm |
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Hi, I'm a humble beginner. Here's my first effort @ colouring a scanned sketch in PS.
Just wanted to post to get some feedback from the spanking artists in this forum and also to get involved in this inspirational community.
Take it apart guys.
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n8
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| Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 5:09 am |
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ahh..another ozzy..good to see 
youve got a nice style going here, you should try to develop it further.
As for the image...only things i have to say are his torso and legs might need to be a tad wider to be in proportion with the upper body and his hand holding the briefcase looks kinda funny.
oh..and welcome to the forums  |
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jayceeL
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| Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 1:29 pm |
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why is it a copy of the character from the game hitman. (www.hitman2.com) Remember to tell when you have copied stuff.
Not a good copy but keep trying and preferably do your own stuff instead of copying others
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Basse_Ex
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| Posted: Sun Jun 16, 2002 1:54 pm |
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Jayceel:
Look to the topic headline. Sketchy Hitman. With a capital H. As in for instance Hitman, the game, or Hitman 2, the sequel. Not as in "A hitman is after me! HEEEELP", or "Come on! Hit, man...".
And now for the drawing...
It's hard to comment very much on the drawing because it's very sketchy, and looks like it was drawn at a small size. When you post sketches I've often found it favourable to post a few of them at the time, since it's tough for the viewers to tell all that much from a single loose sketch.
I like the red tie on the monotone grey. Classy.
It looks like you've got talent and style, but you need more practice(Don't we all). Get some anatomy books, do a lot of life-drawing.
And...
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sw@T
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| Posted: Mon Jun 17, 2002 6:29 pm |
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Thanks v. much for the feedback everyone.
n8 - Thanks for the welcome and suggestions. I knew there was something wrong with the legs but couldn't quite put my finger on it.
jayceeL - I definately should have made it clearer that it was based upon concept artwork for Hitman 2 (Damn I wish they would hurry up and release that over here). My apologies, I had no intention of being misleading.
Basse_Ex - I took life drawing as part of a drawing subject at Uni this semester. But of course all the subjects were naked. I think I will have to get some photgraphs of clothed people . Thanks for the encouragement and suggestions. |
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