[Capt.FlushGarden]

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I'm practising on linedrawings and design , please tell me what u think



Thanx

-john

[makototaramoto]

I REALLY LIKE IT!

[Strawberrysauce]

sooo curvy and sleek, it almost turns me on...

oh yea...


...OH YEA!


nice

[HaRdC0rePixxX]

first of all : i like your style a lot, so i won't waste time telling you what is great about it, but instead i'll try to point out what "bothers" me
the overall design is cool, but it seems like it's hesitating between a profiled fighter and a heavy bomber, so i would go for a more radical design that relates shapes to its main fonction. exemple :

(now, these are quikies to explain my thought, the result is too "real" and the shapes are less interesting than yours but i hope it makes my speech clearer)
also, something looks wrong in the projected shadows.
no offense Cap. ! just trying to help, and i'll take the pic off if you want me to

[Dom]

Great rendering.

I would have to suggest you change that back back wing. From this angle I was a bit confused and though that it was just the left wing in perspective. Hope you know what I mean

Hardcore drew a good version of it that's much more clear.

Cheers

Dom

[Capt.FlushGarden]

THanx guys!

HarcorePiXXX: The reason I post at sijun is to get good crits, and some compliments hehehe, and your reply has both, that means it's the perfect reply

I fell in love with the top overpaint of the aircraft: so I think I'm going to go with that if I do something with this design.

You're right the shadow projection sux, I often tend to spend too little time on these sketches, because I know that you have to be really exact, one little mistake and it blows it up

Dom: I see what you mean, and I think it's the soft shading on the fin that makes it look like the other wing, a sharp shadow at the bottom should do it I thnk,

Peace!

-john

[HaRdC0rePixxX]

u're welcome Cap !