[grasshoppa]

I made this in Painter 7 with no ref(obviously) and was wondering if you guys had any comments or criticism so that I can improve. I am thinking about doing a color version, what do you think?



thanks, hope you enjoy it.

[Vesuvius]

it's got a very nice feel to it, and the pose is good, but the proportions are off, the legs appear too large and the head too small.

[grasshoppa]

Yah, I just drew her out of my head, and I guess that I got the proportions a bit off. I was kinda thinking of doing a color version and I guess that I could fix the proportions. Also, at Roundeye's forum somebody said that the skirt looks too thick and I think that is a valid crit too. Hopefully by it's final incarnation, this drawing will look ok. Thanks for the comment.