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Groady member
Member # Joined: 23 Nov 2001 Posts: 88 Location: Melbourne, Australia
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2002 8:19 am |
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This is a label for Orange Juice (duh!). Feedback appretiated.
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sfr member
Member # Joined: 21 Dec 1999 Posts: 390 Location: Helsinki, Finland
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Posted: Sat May 25, 2002 9:10 am |
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This is a really petty detail, but the official abbreviation for litre is "l", so the etiquette should read "1 l" instead of "1Lt"...
Anyway, it sure looks refreshing
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Molako_Plus member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 290 Location: Toronto (Polska)
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2002 7:30 pm |
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i must say i hate the oranges.
first i feel that the texture looks really fake and it doesnt havta cover the whole orange. the texture you used is too uniform. Personally i would put just enough texture on the orange just to make it seem like a sphere.
second point that bothers me is the white contour you put around the individual oranges. If your gonna incorporate that white outline in your final then you should put it around the two as a group.
the rest of the label is fine i guess... i wouldn't mind seeing another version of your label after you changed things around. |
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prophet member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2001 Posts: 58 Location: Derby, KS USA
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Posted: Sun May 26, 2002 9:32 pm |
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I won't be as rude as to say I HATE the oranges, but maybe you should make them a bit lighter in the highlight area of the orange (about a 20% transparency). The "Bottled 171" text is a bit bland. Maybe use the bold version of that font?
prophet |
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Xysryc member
Member # Joined: 01 Feb 2002 Posts: 92
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Posted: Tue May 28, 2002 9:47 am |
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Really nice!
What program did you use?
Oh, and one question: what are these "crosses" for? This symbols? |
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