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Groady
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Joined: 23 Nov 2001
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Location: Melbourne, Australia

PostPosted: Sat May 25, 2002 8:19 am     Reply with quote
This is a label for Orange Juice (duh!). Feedback appretiated.

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sfr
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Joined: 21 Dec 1999
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Location: Helsinki, Finland

PostPosted: Sat May 25, 2002 9:10 am     Reply with quote
This is a really petty detail, but the official abbreviation for litre is "l", so the etiquette should read "1 l" instead of "1Lt"...

Anyway, it sure looks refreshing

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Molako_Plus
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Joined: 25 Jan 2002
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Location: Toronto (Polska)

PostPosted: Sun May 26, 2002 7:30 pm     Reply with quote
i must say i hate the oranges.

first i feel that the texture looks really fake and it doesnt havta cover the whole orange. the texture you used is too uniform. Personally i would put just enough texture on the orange just to make it seem like a sphere.
second point that bothers me is the white contour you put around the individual oranges. If your gonna incorporate that white outline in your final then you should put it around the two as a group.

the rest of the label is fine i guess... i wouldn't mind seeing another version of your label after you changed things around.
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prophet
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PostPosted: Sun May 26, 2002 9:32 pm     Reply with quote
I won't be as rude as to say I HATE the oranges, but maybe you should make them a bit lighter in the highlight area of the orange (about a 20% transparency). The "Bottled 171" text is a bit bland. Maybe use the bold version of that font?

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Xysryc
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PostPosted: Tue May 28, 2002 9:47 am     Reply with quote
Really nice!

What program did you use?

Oh, and one question: what are these "crosses" for? This symbols?
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