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Ragnarok
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PostPosted: Thu May 16, 2002 6:17 am     Reply with quote
Hello, it's been a loong time since I last posted here. Most of you won't recognize me anymore, but anyways here are three drawigns I'd like to share with you:


This is a portrait from a photo. If you want me to post the photo, just ask.


A tree with the name of the previous girl on it. Simple.


And a happy teddy bear playing with a heart balloon.

That's it, comments and crits welcome.

-Ragnarok

[ May 16, 2002: Message edited by: Ragnarok ]
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PostPosted: Fri May 17, 2002 2:57 pm     Reply with quote
These are pretty nice, you should try to get your hands on "drawing on the right side of the brain" by betty edwards. I'ts a good book and i think you could benefit from using it.

The branches on that tree don't look like anything you'd see on a healthy one.

The teddybear looks nice, it'd be cuter if it had a smaller nose and rounder features IMO.
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PostPosted: Fri May 17, 2002 4:49 pm     Reply with quote
I'll try to get it, thanks.

Also, that's the first tree I try to draw seriously, and I will practice more =)

About the teddy, I agree with you.
Thanks for the compliments!

-Ragnarok
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PostPosted: Sat May 18, 2002 9:09 am     Reply with quote
Hehe I still remember you

I'll comment on the face, because that's the thing I know most about of these I think you should develop your planes a bit, that would make it easier to establish good lighting. Also, I'd say sharpen your pencil a bit more and shade with crosshatching, though that's probably a taste thing

Your name taken from Final Fantasy VIII by any chance ?
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PostPosted: Sat May 18, 2002 4:17 pm     Reply with quote
Glad to see someone still remember me =)

I agree with you about the lighting, but I have to say I have focused on form, and I will probably focus on lighting from on, so I take your comments into account, thanks.

And my name is taken from the Viking Mythology =) what about yours?

-Ragnarok
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PostPosted: Mon May 27, 2002 12:35 pm     Reply with quote
Thank you! =D I'm glad you like it. I'll keep it up, don't worry.

Have you drawn something new?
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PostPosted: Mon May 27, 2002 11:58 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, those look pretty cool! You are making great progress, man. Your lines are still a bit wobbly though. But that will change with enough time and practice. Just keep it up. Your on the right track! =)
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