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Brain · Posted: Sun May 19, 2002 5:28 pm

~1hr 30mins. currently using my dreamcast for net, so will type more when at pc. crits welcome.

Agrajag · member Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2002 Posts: 93

Hi there!
I don't know about the others, but on my system, your image takes FOREVER to load. My browser even timed out on it, but I was curious why noone replied, so I had to leech it with GetRight...

I am not much of an "artist", so what follows is to be handled with care (or disregard, whatever). What bugs me about your portrait is the lack of definition. The face is just one big mass, put right next to another big mass that is your shirt. Maybe a somewhat clearer distinction between light and dark could help give the image more depth.
I take it the image is under progress, which would explain the blurriness of the hair's edges. Getting rid of that will also improve the pic. Oh, wrong forum section by the way, hehe

Is the slightly darker area going to be the ear? It may be a tad too low.
Never mind my babbling. Give it a go, the image sure has potential! I like the weird view you've chosen.

Brain · Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 12:52 am

A reply!!!! @;-)

I don't see why it took so long to load... only a 48Kb file. Server must've been draggy. *shrugs*

Yep, can understand your point with the lack of definition. This was more of a speed pic that a finialised detailed work, but I am done with it. It served it's daily purpose, so I'm in the right forum. @;-) But thanks for the feedback, it is much appreciated. The ear might be a bit low too... *ponders*

PlantMan · Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 1:06 pm

naannanaaaa you are such a nerdy nerdy nerd nerd - there you are with your specs wowoaowowa. I dis you cos i can ! Yeah look at those stars! I am a nerd too so i guess we should be friends. And i have specs too. yayay look at me in the mirror what a pathetic nerdy nerd nerd!
You dissed my soldier ages ago so consider this revenge! naha bet your crying

jasonN · Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 2:49 pm

PlantMan: Are you being serious? I don't know if you're being sarcastic or not, but if you're not... oh dear...

Brain: The pic is looking good! I agree with Agrajag crits. I know you said it is a speed pic, but this has a lot of potential in it to be taken to a finished pic

Also, I like the subtle blues and greens in the skin tone. It works nicely.

Brain · Posted: Wed May 22, 2002 5:57 pm

Plantman: I offered critique on your model, I didn't diss it, and you thanked me for what I had to say. If you had a problem with my comments, you could've easily brought it up at the time, which was July last year... If you're _still_ bitter over this, either contact me or go touch a llama. Get back in touch with God's fuzzy creatures. @:-D

jasonN: I think I might go back an take this further after many suggestions to do so. Prolly do that next week sometime.

PlantMan · Posted: Thu May 23, 2002 12:12 pm

lol intergalactic fuzzy laaaammmaas

nerdy nerdy