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BASTION
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 3:08 pm     Reply with quote
this is the last of 5 characters I am designing for an online comic, her name is Naree Vita and she is a druid/mage of sorts. any advice would be very beneficial



thanks.
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 3:53 pm     Reply with quote
I think the anatomy is off somewhere,
I want to say it's the head that's too small.

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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 3:58 pm     Reply with quote
She looks kind of stiff.
Her boobs don't look right.
Give her bigger eyes, smoother hair and don't show the ear.

Just my 10 cents...

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PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2002 10:22 am     Reply with quote
her left arm looks odd to me
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PostPosted: Tue May 21, 2002 10:35 am     Reply with quote
I think the hands and the head are just a bit small. I love the tatoo though! I also like the concept itself. Pretty outfit.
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