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Shai K.
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 7:54 am     Reply with quote
Hi there, this is my first post here.
what do you think?

http://www.the-satan.org/shai/love.jpg

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Asurfael
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 7:57 am     Reply with quote
looks very nice to me... you should just add a link to the picture, it isn't showing that way. Wasn't? It's showing now... Well at least add a link to that below the pic in case somebody else's having probs as well...

(edit: showed up after all, maybe in my cache...)

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Bilbo
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 9:25 am     Reply with quote
looks great . (and the image loaded up without any problems).
as to my crits- the eye on our left seems to be bulging too much, should be partially concealed by the nose.. also, the way the head is connected to the body feels wrong- doesn't seem to be room for a neck, and there's no indication of where the jaw ends and the neck begins. i'm not sure about either of these, though.
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kana
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 9:37 am     Reply with quote
nice clean style you have there. good work.
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The Fritz
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Joined: 11 Feb 2001
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 9:41 am     Reply with quote
Very nice style, reminds me of some of those airbrush classicals. For crits, I get the feeling part of the back of her head is missing and yes, a neck would be fine too.
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Imirie
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 10:09 am     Reply with quote
that's really nice! I agree w/ the back of the head thing, tho
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nevanlinna
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PostPosted: Sun May 19, 2002 11:51 pm     Reply with quote
aika muovinen....
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silverrrspoon
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 2:59 am     Reply with quote
Pretty and precious ;-) I really like the style, not too much 'realistic' way.

nevanlinna > in my opinnion, ei tuo muovisuus haittaa, sopii tyyliin. eik� tuo nyt *niiiin* muovinen ole.
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nevanlinna
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 4:15 am     Reply with quote
heh joo. there is no spoon....=)
oli v�syneen kommentti...
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colonel kurtz
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 9:02 am     Reply with quote
Did you use a pic of Jennifer Love Hewitt as a reference? Or am I seeing things?
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Shai K.
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PostPosted: Mon May 20, 2002 9:18 am     Reply with quote
Jennifer Love Hewitt?! where did you get that idea? - guys thank you for the critics it helped me, i sure appreciate it
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