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jayceeL
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end of post!!!!!!!!!
[ June 03, 2002: Message edited by: jayceeL ] |
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visualsiege
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| Posted: Sun May 12, 2002 6:35 am |
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I like your style, and I think you've done a damn nice job on this pic. keep up the good work.
crits, none really. for some reason the character doesn't really appeal to me, but that may just be because he doesn't look that mean :P like I said though, keep up the great work |
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Cleoric
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| Posted: Sun May 12, 2002 11:06 pm |
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| Well, personally, I think his head should be bigger for the width and size of his upper body. *shrug* Just doesn't look right. |
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nevanlinna
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| Posted: Sun May 12, 2002 11:08 pm |
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GREAT JOB [djyyd]!
Like your style...
crits...: Maybe his shoes could be a bit bigger?!
Very nice. |
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Snorkles
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| Posted: Mon May 13, 2002 7:42 am |
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| super mario big daddy |
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jayceeL
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| Posted: Tue May 14, 2002 9:00 am |
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thanks for the comments:
Visualsiege - I'll try and make them meaner next time 
nevanlinna - I think your right, the shoes should be bigger, in fact I think his legs would look better a bit bigger
Cleoric - Not sure I agree with the head size. I was trying to make him look big, by making his torso big in relation to his head. |
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daz199
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| Posted: Tue May 14, 2002 2:53 pm |
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loooks good but the proportions are horrible  |
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collin
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| Posted: Wed May 15, 2002 7:22 pm |
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| It looks pretty good. Have you ever played Arcanum? It reminds me of a dwarf technologist. |
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Sightunseen
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| Posted: Wed May 15, 2002 7:35 pm |
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| Looks really good (better than I could do) but I really don't like the proportions, like the feet are really small and he is really midgit like, maybe you were going for that, but I don't like the way he is vertically challenged |
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jayceeL
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| Posted: Fri May 17, 2002 8:55 am |
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Sometimes when I have done a painting I don't see the errors before a while after it's done, which is the case with this one. I think your all right that there is something wrong with the proportions. I personally think it's mostly the legs and feet. I was going for a very wide look but I think I overdid it a bit. Thanks for the comments it has made me realize how to improve it....
JayCeeL |
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