[Dom]

Someone already pointed out that the left hand may be a bit small.


Let me know what you think.

[Awetopsy]

the girl is really cool... a little lanky.. but cool..

the thing in the back needs work.. it looks strange... hes so big and not like the same style as she is painted in.. He looks rushed..

the left hand side of the pic looks like you spent alot of time on it.. the right hand side looks like you rushed it.

[ May 13, 2002: Message edited by: Awetopsy ]

[Dom]

Thanks Awetopsy,

But when painting this there were certain things I wanted to accent, in other words catch your eye. That's why some parts have less detail then others. This front hand I found less important then the other, same with the beast and the woman.

Thanks for the critique.

[faeklone]

The only thing that's really bugging me is the way you rendered the hand that's holding her skirt. It looks like she broke her wrist at that angle(ouch!). Anyway, I thin that could easily be solved by drawing that hand at more of a diagonal rather than at a horizontal(Look at the fingers). Also, to help it out a bit, make that arm come into the body more to feel more like it's attached to the wrist of the hand. The line of dark just above her belly button is rougly where her elbow should be.

Other than that a really kewl pic!