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P diddy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Mar 2001 Posts: 39 Location: oakland, ca, usa
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 9:53 am |
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hey everyone,
just spent some time last night trying to refine techniques for digital painting. Love demon spooges style, very rough but when you step back, all the rough lines form together to create an image that has so much mood.
it's not the details that makes an image, it's the subtle changes of light. Our eyes don't focus on every detail we see. Trying to capture that feel in these paintings.
would love to hear some feedback from you folks.
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Twice member
Member # Joined: 11 Feb 2001 Posts: 240 Location: Norway
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 2:51 pm |
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I don't thin our new little member Mr Crowley knows what he is talking about. You have captured the feel realy good in my opinion. The two first once are my favourit pices. Damn great. And I would love to see you keep going on with those loose strokes.... ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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P diddy junior member
Member # Joined: 06 Mar 2001 Posts: 39 Location: oakland, ca, usa
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 5:36 pm |
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thanks both for the comments.
andskj, i kinda see what crowley means about the roughness.
i think also knowing the subjects is key. Once i know the shapes and such, it's easier to focus on placing more deliberate strokes.
I redid the bonobo, spending about an hour on it, and already it's cleaner. I want to spend a bit more on it adding some detail work to the hands and the face, maybe just the face.
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eyewoo member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2001 Posts: 2662 Location: Carbondale, CO
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 6:30 pm |
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I think they are wonderful sketches... very alive and interesting. Taking them farther to a more finished state would also be wonderful and skillful. You've started doing that very well with bonobo... |
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Mr Crowley junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 22 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue May 07, 2002 11:00 pm |
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i think you didn't capture that "feel"
your strokes are too messy.. |
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Mr Crowley junior member
Member # Joined: 13 Jan 2002 Posts: 22 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Wed May 08, 2002 1:31 am |
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now i like the gorilla's head very much
you could suggest fur and hair a little more.
I would do some hard edges to the body and also some strokes going outside of the subject's border(i hope you know what i mean 'cause my english is rather poor . |
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