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Godwin · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 6:51 am

im new here, and this is one of my latest works in PS for a red alert 2 modification(mod) called AR2(link in my sig)
comments are welcome

[ April 24, 2002: Message edited by: Godwin ]

Godwin · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 7:02 am

gah i feel so embarrased posting this crap after seeing the other stuff around here...

Cerberus · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 7:05 am

i like it its cool

and i know how u feel i am new here and i feel a lil embarassed with some of my stuff but we must post ne ways lol

NiM · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:32 am

I think you did a good job with the colors, but it feels a bit too fuzzy, try to define the edges a bit more... It's a pretty cool pic, only thing one can do to improve is to practice so keep it up

Allen W · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 9:45 am

Nicely done. I like the textures you've put on the helmets and the little patches of snow/ice/wear&tear they have. My only suggestion, compositionally, is that you might want to consider having some enemies closer to the attackers in the foreground. I think the closer action would make the picture more exciting.

My favorite is the soldier holding the rocket launcher. The shading on him looks rendered -- you've really nailed the shadows and shapes.

Awetopsy · Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2002 3:34 pm

I like it.. dont worry bout posting around all the others..

I thought this was 3d at first..

Rogelio Olguin · member Member # Joined: 19 Apr 2002 Posts: 77

yeah I also thought it was a 3d for that i like it!! it is hard to make it look so 3Dish

it is pretty neat and you should not be emberessed this is good. just keep going at it

I know I am and most in these fourms are a learning a lot I am new also I like this fourm so far...

Godwin · Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 6:51 am

ahhh, thanks guys
in reply to allen, this is a loading screen so i thought it would be better to have the opposing force on the other side far away, like saying, 'the war hasnt started' and that the player will 'play' the war

i have done closer encounters before

most of my previous work lacked in detail because i didnt really know how to add it

ken · Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2002 7:45 am

hey, some nice work there. i love the tank pic. i can't help but say when i first saw your first pic i thought they were lego men

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there's something odd about your colors - i think you need more variation in hue and saturation.

Godwin · Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2002 6:07 am

odd colours? hmmm
what do u mean?
maybe its my monitor?

ken · Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2002 10:54 am

no, it's not your monitor. there's just something unnatural i find about your coloring... i don't know enough color theory to put it into words. don't worry about it, i'm talking about things i don't know about.

-Ken

Godwin · Posted: Fri Apr 26, 2002 10:50 pm

ahh ok