[BASTION]

This (I think) is the final vesrsion of my character Tenebris who will feature in a project I am working on. I tried to take the best features of my previous 2 attempts ( http://eatpoo.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=1200 ) and comments made and incorporate them into a final image.



any feedback on the character, style, inking or anything else that comes to mind would be greatly appreciated, cheers

[notic]

I totally dig the linework, some good coloring would look nice

[Basse_Ex]

Everybody has half his face covered these days. Strange... are they really that ugly?

Anyhow, love the drawing. Nice clean style. I would have liked some more difference in lineweight on the outline, though.
His left(Our right) hand is amazing. All hands in the whole wide world should look like that hand. Don't know why I got stuck on that detail, but anyhow, it's not correct, but it's just very, very cool.

Uhhh.....

That's it.

[iByrn]

It's a solid looking picture, but I agree, some line weight variations would be nice, as well as more emphasis on curves (His legs are a bit straight-up-and-down). The whole figure doesn't seem especially volumetric (wow, I actually learned a useful word form my art history teacher!).

[Mb]

Cool character, but the absolute straightness of the rope is really distracting for me. Breaks the whole flow of the drawing. Besides, he doesn't seem to be pulling the rope taut, so it should be sagging some.