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Borstj
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 Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:20 pm |
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Hey i'm back *hopes someone remembers him*
anyways here's a new piece
the text is from Godspeed You Black Emperor!'s "The dead flag blues" and if u heard that song you'll know why the piece is what it is 
anyways comments ....please 
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SplitSoul
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| Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 6:30 pm |
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| I don't like it, sorry. It's way too chaotic for my tastes. But GYBE! rule my briefs (as opposed to "roxoring my boxorz"). I saw them in concert a few weeks ago, with Silo as the opening band. Amazing beyond words. |
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Beowulfthefallen
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| Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 7:36 pm |
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| I like it! Except the typeface looks out of place. Too clean, make it a little bit shattered or something. |
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gArGOyLe^
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| Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2002 7:46 pm |
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I like it alot! especially the red in the middle.. I like  |
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Borstj
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 1:41 am |
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thanks for the comments so far
SplitSoul: to bad you don't like it  but if u think its chaotic then mission accomplished for me
Beowulfthefallen: maybe your right about the font but i didnt want it hard to read, but maybe i'll try to grunge it a bit
gArGOyLe^: if u have black you have to have red |
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Bob the Newt
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 3:43 am |
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the random bold words make it look fuckin weird
do a picture for static, much freakier song
or do moya, it doesnt have any words but its the best song ever so whatever
and wtf splitsoul you fucking suck i hope you get aids saaw them live you fuckin cocksucker
[ April 21, 2002: Message edited by: Bob the Newt ] |
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scylla
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 7:44 am |
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| It's very segmented, is that intentional? |
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Borstj
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 8:25 am |
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a wee update
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aColdOldKodiak
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| Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2002 1:22 pm |
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| I think it's cool, but i'm gonna have to aggree on the random bold word thing. It forces me to read like how captain kirk speaks. |
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