[Ascan]

[Basse_Ex]

Very sweet picture... I love the marygold\bug\fly\thingie\whatsitcalled?

I do have some problems with the skies. They look too... material?
Maybe that's not it though... Maybe it's the they run, as everything else, vertically through the picture. I think the composition would gain very much from letting the skies run diagonally or perhaps even horizontaly. Hopefully that would give the picture a bit more life. They lead the viewers eyes too much away from the picture as it is now.
Otherwise, very nice.

[madmouth]

pretty! but the cloud thing is true

[Ascan]

Ok, made some corrections with grass, clouds and colors.

first variant



second variant

[Basse_Ex]

Oh no!

Where's the bug?

oh... there it is...

Anyway... The skies still look a bit too material, but the direction change is all good.
But I liked the picture better when it had larger grass, and that cute bug.

I really don't have any suggestion on how to make the skies feel more natural, since I almost exclusivly work in black&white, but there's a lot of awesome "sky-artists" here, I'm sure some of them could help you.

Oh...

That last picture.

That's not "Summer Memories"!

It's "Apocalypse Memories"!

[Bob the Newt]

like when we had sex