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Phb
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Joined: 05 Apr 2002
Posts: 45
Location: Verona - Italy

PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 10:45 am     Reply with quote
Hello everybody, I'm italian and i hope i'm not the only one..

This is some of my creation, i start to make digital work from about a month..

C&C are welcome, I use a trust tablet a100 (yes it's the smallest )



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Dryfire
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Joined: 21 May 2000
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Location: Long Island, NY

PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 1:22 pm     Reply with quote
Hey man, thats pretty cool, good sense of depth. You should work more on the knight's right hand, and add shadows off the peices of leather that are holding the sheild onto his hand, to give the hand a better sense of depth, because right now it looks like the hand is melding with the sheild. Great job though, nice colors. oh and, i can't see the other picture
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Rat
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Posts: 851
Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada

PostPosted: Sat Apr 13, 2002 1:33 pm     Reply with quote
Hey, Phb. I'm half Italian, but my nonna, nonno and great nonna moved here (Canada, west coast) about 45 years ago from Bagnole(sp?).

Like DryFire said, the right arm looks like it's melding with the shield. Parts of the painting look more cartoony than others. Is that deliberate? Can't tell.

I think it looks great.

[ April 13, 2002: Message edited by: Rat ]
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Phb
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 14, 2002 2:12 am     Reply with quote
Thank you for your suggest,
I fix the second pic and...
it's true what Rat say, but (for me it's difficult to say it in english) i already have to define a style... and at this time it's impossible to me to finish a work all in the same style... I work only 2,3 hours a day it's only a hobby for me i hope you like my next picture, i think i post a little work in progress early..


I have just 2 question, what is the member rate stars? And for make a good pic at what resolution i have to work? The footman for example is a 1500*1120..


bye..

p.s. (Had i wrote a good english?)

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