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Belisarius
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2002 7:29 am     Reply with quote
Post all your great castle pics here.

I ll start it off with one of my own castles. I am sorry that it is geocities ... (drag adress to the adress bar)
http://www.geocities.com/ivoklaus/castlegrey.jpg

Of course you can also criticise ...
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Tillek
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2002 8:43 am     Reply with quote
very nice job. Your style reminds me a bit of Mullins' with the scribbling in order to create texture and movement.

I think the piece could deffinatley be a bit more dynamic though, maybe a sunrise/sunset in the background, or a dragon and a rider or something. It could just be that I've been a little obsessed with sunrises latley in my paintings... Also the lighting seems a bit off. Nice job though! You've got a great style

*Starts painting a castle*.
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2002 3:56 pm     Reply with quote
It's a nice castle - great location for one! Quick crit: I find your range of lights to dark to be too narrow. Darker darks in the shadow's should make your piece a little more 3D.
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Belisarius
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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2002 4:50 pm     Reply with quote
Thank you for your critics,

Cedrian:
I agree that it lacks a certain dynamic and yes, Craig was certainly a big inspiration.

Radiater:
That always seems to be my problem. I always end up with not enough darkness and light.

That will certainly help me in my next piece...
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