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Vasuki · junior member Member # Joined: 02 Apr 2002 Posts: 14

If anybody remembers FFVI, this is from the final battle; thought I'd get some feedback on it if anyone's willing

AJ · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:43 am

Very nice.

The demon's hands need to be much larger though. The perspective you have there makes his arms look chubby with little hands on the end of them.

I like the over all detail though. Nice one mate.

Gygaxis · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:44 am

I really enjoy the top part of this image, and the way it progresses down. My only reall crit is one of composition. I feel the bottom seems to float up off the page, not really grounding the picture. In turn I think the reason why is that the arms are too closed in on the bottom piece of the godess statue. Were they open more, to continue the very nice perspective work of the figure, it would enhance the composition

jesusclone · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 8:05 am

Very nice, I would agree that the demons hands need to be bigger though. I'd also like to see this piece in color

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http://www.twigpeople.com/dmo

The Green Man · Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 4:12 pm

Very cool subject matter.. FF6 is the best in the series. KEFKA ROCKS!!!
Anyway I think the demon(esper) on the bottom needs wrists, and the perspective is off. when looking at the bottom figure it's straight on, as you travel up the composition it is more of 1 point pespective fading away from the viewer. It creates some conflict in the overall flow of movement in the piece.

swampbug · Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 12:47 am

woah... sweet image. Being a OLd school FF gamer myself, this iamge kicks. Yeah I t needs work liek the guys above me suggested. The bottom guy needs to be alot bigger... maybe leaning forward... ontop of us.

No kefka?

anywhoo. sweet stuff. I like how you prolly refrenced the game grpahics, but took your own take on many things.

Forgive me if I'm wrong.

This badboy would def. need to be colored!

El gochusam · junior member Member # Joined: 04 Apr 2002 Posts: 1

Ya, that definately brings back memories. As it just so happens FF6 is my favorite game of all time. I actually forgot, but in my imagination whenever I think of the goddesses, I imagine some industrial style technolodgy to be embedded into the statues. It goes along with the whole "style" of final fantasy. You know oldschool knights mixed with modern techstuff like pipes and gears. my suggestion, would be to add some piping running up through the statues. cool, keep it up.

Vasuki · junior member Member # Joined: 02 Apr 2002 Posts: 14

Thanks for the comments

Yeah; no Kefka; I ran out of room. I'll take all the stuff about fixing the bottom one's hands into consideration; maybe try to fix his perspective a bit to match the rest of the image; I wasn't too happy with how he came out to begin with.

I'll try to color it too when I get a chance; I think it'd look really sweet once I get that finished

Thanks again everyone!