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Vasuki
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 Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 9:54 pm |
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I did this digital portrait in Photoshop; was hoping someone could give me some constructive feedback on it 
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louis finazzo
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 10:13 pm |
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not to sound like an ass. but eyes are too far apart, lips are at the wrong perspective... like they should curve around the face differently. and the wrist that the face is leaning on seems like it's all rubbery or something. think of what a real forearm would do... more straight. this stuff all seems obvious to me, but you asked. hope this helps  |
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senate
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 10:49 pm |
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| she looks like rubber, proportions are all wrong on her head, and you have different perspectives going on here |
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Akasha
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 11:01 pm |
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Well I like it!! I love the colors of the hair and the texture, it looks almost real. I think that with the positioning of the the face and taking into consideration that it's being mooshed into her hand it looks more than fine!! Have to say Anata I like how you color your images!! I do agree with the hand being rubbery looking though . Do you have any other things to put up?
Wooooooo!!
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Prawn
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| Posted: Tue Apr 02, 2002 11:57 pm |
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heh, do you usually give feedback to your own pictures Akasha?  |
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Akasha
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:01 am |
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Hahahahhah I wish I could draw!! But sadly I live vicariously through all you talented people
Why would you think that by the way?
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Vasuki
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:01 am |
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| Ummm....no; I drew that picture. There's quite a difference between "Ananta" and "Akasha" |
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Prawn
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:06 am |
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Nah, just the peculiar fact that you reply at the same time and have reg #6840 and #6839. If I'm wrong, please forgive me. I'm just nosy by nature. Other than that, I like the colours you've selected. =)
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Vasuki
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:12 am |
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You're #6841; how do I know you're not me?  |
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Prawn
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 12:17 am |
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| Hehe, wouldnt want to blow my own cover. Anyways, have fun. |
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deleuran
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 2:43 am |
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I like the colors and the hair, but some of the proportions sucks  And imo i think the edges on the face and so should be more clear.. more lined up if you know what i mean! Well anyway good work! |
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kanabis
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 2:46 am |
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| its the same person talking to him(her)self .. go the schizophrenic |
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jesusclone
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| Posted: Wed Apr 03, 2002 6:27 am |
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In addition to what was said, I think the hair is too hard-edged, she needs to have some stray hairs . gluck
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