HellSpawn
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Location: Montreal
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 Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 1:02 pm |
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Hey guys,
I'm doing this picture for work and I could really use some crits. I would like to add more depth to it for starters. and I'm not so sure on the colors... Can any of you talented experts give me some hints/pointers/paint overs to show me the errors of my ways.
I also included a work in progress to show the steps I took...
Cheers,
- Shawn
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Hunago
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Location: New Zealand
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| Posted: Thu Mar 28, 2002 4:43 pm |
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Looks impressive. I remember the Goodbrush site has a gallery called 500 Nations with similiar subjects, you could check it out.
A few things I could see, the closest top corner of the top house seem just a wee bit high. The trees has similiar level of saturation as the temple, might have to darken them a bit. Aside from that, I think you could also play with desaturating either the temple or the grass, some parts seem over-saturated under the sky condition.
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