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ARTEmio
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 1:52 pm     Reply with quote
C&C are welcome,



thanx,

artemio
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Gil Agud�n
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 5:34 pm     Reply with quote
I love it!! Is this is just a sketch I can't wait to see the finish painting!! It�s going to be awesome!! well, it is awesome so far so it's going to be spectacular!!!
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angle
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 21, 2002 9:14 pm     Reply with quote
i really like this one =]

the different horses in various directions gives me an idea of them moving around, circling while their riders shout orders or reports to one another...

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ARTEmio
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 3:35 am     Reply with quote
Gil Agudin, This was a study on painter7 for an oil on canvas, But I am thinking of going digital all the way. My main concern is not to "loose the looseness" on this, I think it gives the painting more movement and vibration to such a subject as a battle. So I still have to decide what technique(brushes and filters) should be more apropriate to that. Thank you and I will post it when I finish it.

Angle, Thank you, glad you like it. I like the horses moving around as well, make the riders busy, many things happening in the picture. thanks for your comments.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 4:32 am     Reply with quote
The painting is superb, but I find the composition awkward - there's too much distinction between foreground and back, the horses end too neatly at the ends of the canvis, and though there doesn't seem to be a foregorund (main character(s)), the figures aren't chaotic enough to be a "pure" bakground. I suppose these are natural problems when painting pictures of this scope

Does this make any sense ?
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 5:07 am     Reply with quote
I wish I could see it. But it doesn't load.
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ARTEmio
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 5:48 am     Reply with quote
Transcendent, Yes it makes a lot of sense, I know what you mean. I start a study just capturing the movements and some composition. and I try not to make a part of the pic more "eye capturer" than the rest, thats why the eyes flow on the whole thing giving it this chaotic impression, after that I go polishing and refining the light and contrast. although I feel that this chaotic composition fits this subject(battle) prety nice. But I still have to link the foregroung and background more naturaly. Thanks a lot for your comment.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 7:32 am     Reply with quote
Excelent work. Sketch or not, you could stop now and it would still be a fantastic image.
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ARTEmio
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 1:47 pm     Reply with quote
hunter_rose0, thank you. and here is an updated img.

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[666]Flat
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 22, 2002 2:30 pm     Reply with quote
SWEETNESS GALORE
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Highfive
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 8:33 am     Reply with quote
That's just fantastic! Very alive and a really original choice of colours. No-one's ever tried a pink fogging-effect yet and your's really works!
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 23, 2002 9:23 am     Reply with quote
[666]flat, thanks!

Highfive, yes, that was a very odd choice of color but I agree with you, it works prety good! thank you.
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