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Mysen
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 3:43 pm     Reply with quote
I am working on this for a school project. Now i have to colour it but i wanted to see what you guys thought of the sketch first.. C&C appreciated.



and if the image doesnt work... then
DRAG TO ADDRESS BAR

[ March 09, 2002: Message edited by: arkenoid ]


*** I just fixed the arms a little.. they were pretty flat.. and things.. thanks for the cc on fixing them***

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 3:51 pm     Reply with quote
that looks really cool. i would watch the arm on the right, it might need a bit more 3D feel to it, give it some mass and bulk. I think were the rest of the image portrays this, it just falls short on the right arm. what are you thinking for colors?
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 3:57 pm     Reply with quote
For colors i was thinking a crimson wrap around the waste.. Some faded brown leather.. but im not sure about the skin yet

yes that arm does need some mass.. i was planning on having him almost growing out of a dark brackground and that arm and his lower body becomes silhoeted. But.. thats just a thought for now..
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 7:10 am     Reply with quote
Here is an update. Im working on the colors its slowly starting to come out. Im not sure what to do with the BG yet.. maybe some sihloettes of some other nasties or something..



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M.A.C.K
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 7:44 am     Reply with quote
That looks great.

perhaps you could amke the skin a little more blue (bit less steriotypical) just a suggestion.

As for the background, perhaps some form of cave? or like u mentioned a battle or horde behind this pretty guy

Keep it up
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 9:55 am     Reply with quote
The perspective looks a little off around the stomach area. It looks to flat at the moment. I love the head though, great work.
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 7:26 pm     Reply with quote
I decided to take someones advice and change the skinf to a bluish its looking actually.

ANd yeah the stomache is off.. i dont have time to fix it ATM but i will keep it in mind for future projects. Thanks for the tips guys..

OH yah the original drawing is multiplied on top thats why its a it grainy in some places.. it will be removed later on so the grain will be gon except in some places that need to look dirty.




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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 9:58 pm     Reply with quote
The new progressionof the pic.. im doing the caves thing



comments & crits welcome and appreciated
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 12:14 am     Reply with quote
Holy hell that looks good!

This is my first post here and I wouldnt have posted unless I saw this thread. Your picture is so cool! I love the step by step thing going on...

Good Job,
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 12:39 am     Reply with quote
wow i never thought about keeping a pallette of colors on the image to easily grab colors. that saves a few clicks... thanks ;}
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 1:53 pm     Reply with quote
Hey man, I likes it alot. Especially the detail in the face. If you havn't yet, you might wanna decide how your scene is gonna be lit although I'm sure you've done this Is he at the mouth of the cave being lit by the sun? Or is he deep in a cave being lit by torches? If it is the latter you might wanna put in some stronger shadows and some yellow highlights. Very cool pic anways. Like the stitchin. Oh someday..someday I'll draw like that.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 3:00 pm     Reply with quote
Hey dedalus Yeah its the first one.. hes at the mouth of the cave. or a window sort of..

thanks for the comments guys
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PostPosted: Thu Mar 14, 2002 5:08 pm     Reply with quote
Nice drawing. I didn't quite finish this but...



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