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IodineSoup junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2002 11:29 pm |
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Been a while since I last posted anything.
Started as a pencil doodle.
Coloured in Photoshop.
A lot has been changed since the original pencil drawing, for the better of for the worse, I have no idea.
This would be considered finished, but it wouldn't hurt if you have any suggestions for possible improvements or tweaks to the pic.
[ March 08, 2002: Message edited by: IodineSoup ]
[ March 08, 2002: Message edited by: IodineSoup ] |
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jabber member
Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 235 Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 12:19 am |
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its really nice, but kinda creepy at the same time. there is something off about the hands, im not sure what it is though. i dig it. |
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Duncan member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 157 Location: Japan
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 6:32 am |
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I think they are both nice, but the sketch has more... character |
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ken member
Member # Joined: 30 Jul 2001 Posts: 256 Location: adelaide, au
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 8:19 am |
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i like it, i like it a lot. i think it would be better if she was holding on tighter with her right hand though.
-Ken |
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jesusclone member
Member # Joined: 25 Jan 2002 Posts: 165 Location: Tx
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 8:43 am |
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WOoooow
Will she be a playable character in the newest Street Fighter game?
I think Ken is right though, the bat looks like it's just kinda sitting on her shoulder instead of her holding it
I saved them both
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bock junior member
Member # Joined: 12 Feb 2002 Posts: 18 Location: Michigan
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Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 9:21 am |
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looks like the bat has more weight in the scketch which is nice, also I reall like the bag hanging off the bat in the scketch for some reason, other than that I reall like the painting, cool work |
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IodineSoup junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 12:22 am |
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Much thanks to all.
The bat is suppose to rest on her shoulder,
I changed it from the initial sketch cos it
looked kinda stupid hovering above her shoulder.
Hmm, Duncan, I have to agree with you on
that one, I feel that sketches seem to
have more life than a finalized piece of
work. |
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Duncan member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 157 Location: Japan
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 6:51 am |
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I know EXACTLY what you mean.
probably many people here agree |
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itchi member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2000 Posts: 71 Location: san diego, ca
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 7:14 am |
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wow that is a great pic. creepy, but very well done. i love the style in particular. yeah sketches look livelier cause you got all those stray lines which give it this energized look. i think thats why comicbook people add all that detail ^^ |
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Highfive member
Member # Joined: 08 Oct 2001 Posts: 640 Location: Brisbane, AU
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Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 8:23 am |
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You've gotta wonder under what circumstances a house-maid would be holding a bloody baseball bat, but hey
That's a very cute alternative-style pic. Love her cute face and the outfit. I reckon it would look even better if you check out any tutorials about good techniques for rendering hair in colour. |
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IodineSoup junior member
Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 6 Location: Singapore
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 1:48 am |
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Work on rendering hair, check.
Much thanks.
Actually, I can think of a rather huge number of possible scenarios that would result in a house maid with a bloodied baseball bat, from unwanted relatives to door to door salespeople to certain religious organisations and beyond. |
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cartman junior member
Member # Joined: 11 Mar 2002 Posts: 18
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 8:26 pm |
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I wasn't sure what to expect given the title of this thread But, I like this a lot. Nice blend of creepiness and cuteness. She can smash my skull with a baseball bat anytime! |
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wus member
Member # Joined: 15 Oct 2001 Posts: 51 Location: denver
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Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 10:58 pm |
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cool! pretty things that scare us are good! |
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