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hunter_rose0
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 8:29 pm     Reply with quote
This is the finished art developed from my thread about inspiration over in wip. That thread was more about getting ideas so I havn't realy heard any feedback on this. I'd like to hear any critiques, thanks.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 9:18 pm     Reply with quote
lol, damn, he sure looks proud . The arm is a funny position also IMO

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 9:26 pm     Reply with quote
... it's great! but as was said with the arm, it looks like he's about to ram it up his butt or something. But that's fine too.
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Torstein Nordstrand
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 11:49 pm     Reply with quote
I like his colous, and especially his reddish skin. Nice.
And the hand works for me, a bit exotic, as the figure itself.

Edit: ...but the under/end-side of his headcloth needs some work still, methinks?

[ March 09, 2002: Message edited by: Torstein Nordstrand ]
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 1:33 am     Reply with quote
My first thougt was: Oh, sultan SALADIN from "Nathan the wise" by G.E.Lessing.

Great work!
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palladia mors '
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 10:15 am     Reply with quote
first the compliments to smoothen off:
posture looks great (though it looks more like a slave/guard's pose, not very sultanish), colors look good too.
as for crits:
check the anatomy with the left arm (our left). the right arm looks misplaced, other than that it's ok. sounds like I'm whining, but check the ribcage too... and the loin cloth implies that he has no m. glutei maximi
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 9:35 pm     Reply with quote
awesome! he looks so sassy and like he's about to jump into someone's pants. an awesome piece of work. there is something weird with his forearm, maybe less contrast on the underside of the muscle and a pointier elbow would correct things.
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PostPosted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 10:13 pm     Reply with quote
wow he sure is flexible o.o

the arm does look funny...like where the bicep meets elbow area..but then again everything looks funny right now *woozy*
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