Sijun Forums :: View topic - tall girl (semi-nudity), don't look if u have heart trouble.

:::nVIDIA::: · Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2002 8:52 pm

OK, my first semi-nude post. I did this drawing while listening to co-worker's Kylie Minogue CD - he plays it like 100 times a day. Crits are welcome. Ed--

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Hunago · Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2002 9:03 pm

Sexxy! It's worth the risk of having a heart attack

Her hair has a semi trasparent membrane look that's quite cool, the face's very cute too. Nice job.

Gil Agud�n · member Member # Joined: 14 Feb 2002 Posts: 103

I really like the stylized figure� the proportions, if it�s true they r not classical, they seem to work perfectly for this image!!! Good work!! are u gonna pay my medical expenses after this heart attack???

Dr. Bang · Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2002 10:42 pm

*errection*

Soulfuct · Posted: Fri Mar 08, 2002 11:34 pm

^^^^^^^^
mauahahhaha bro....you make eatpoo forums go around and around!!!!!!!
funny ass mofo

nice lady

Bob the Newt · Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 12:24 am

your girls are cool but they all look the same

CyberLink · Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 2:34 am

2 :::nVIDIA:::

Nice job. I like her and previous ones you've posted ;-)

What about your co-worker - if you could get a headphones (like I did) that could solve your problem :-)

Vesuvius · Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 8:26 am

oh god my heart! not now...
URK!

*keels over dead*

waylon · Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 6:17 pm

What was the term I heard once? Oh yeah. "Give her a sandwich."

Quite nice!

:::nVIDIA::: · Posted: Sat Mar 09, 2002 9:38 pm

Yeah, I know this girl is stylized. I've done realistic types but coming from animation realistic drawings don't pop off da page. You know, you gotta look at in terms of silhouette. Every part of body and edges have to look alike someone can animate and convey emotion. And how to short-cut the shapes since one is drawing 24 drawings per second. So, the mentality behind this drawing is economy in lines. Ed--

Biseor · member Member # Joined: 10 Nov 2001 Posts: 62 Location: US

Is there any reason people use that blue pencil color in their sketches? I've noticed that alot lately.

Just curious.

jesusclone · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 12:39 am

great sketch, I think her shoulders may be a little broad though.

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louis finazzo · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 2:10 am

i think it gives it more of a draft look, like how blueprints are in that blue ink or whatever... that seems to make the most sense to me anyway =\

[666]Flat · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 4:31 am

I WOULD DO HER TOO!

itchi · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 7:10 am

hey ed just saw this at francis' board. the different sign name threw me

great stuff man!

Man With No Name · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 9:38 am

Great as usual ed...

Only one quick crit though... The rib cage really bugs me... the right (front side) is fine, but I think there should be a little more to the left (or her back.) You can still keep your simplicity of lines, or whatever you animators like to call it.. just draw a quick oval starting up at her neck down to her belly button. This should give you a quick outline of the rib-cage... maybe I'll post a quick paint over in a little while to better explain myself..

10 points for style though... dynamic and fluid. Very nice.

Man With No Name · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 10:04 am

Here you go...
This might explain itself better...

I actually may have made the oval a little too big, but I think it get's my point across... ?

:::nVIDIA::: · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 10:55 am

Thanks for the construction lesson. Remember this is stylized chick. So, her anatomy is stylized as well. Your construction maybe the way to go, but I went through that already myself but it takes the leaness away doesn't it? And kinda makes it boring. I arched her spine slighty giving a taut feel, conveying a feeling of readiness. I had to take some license and torgue her torso, for me it's the feel not correctness. Prb doesn't make sense to most people but it's an experiment. (I've revised some areas, guyz are getting annoyed with her tuff looking shoulders, but that was the idea)

Ed--

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Man With No Name · Posted: Sun Mar 10, 2002 6:22 pm

Actually, I like your re-draw alot. It completely fixes any problems I had with the rib cage and yet she still looks very dynamic and thin (something the paint over didn't accomplish.) very nice. The triangular/oval shape (gee, what would you call it?) is something I've never considered using with the rib cage. I like it alot.
Please keep posting these, it's the only work that has given me any inspiration lately...

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wayfinder · Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 3:17 am

she's a bit on the bony side, eh?

Olsen · Posted: Mon Mar 11, 2002 8:48 am

something about the left hand that bothers me...other then that amazing work.

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