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gorky
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2002 5:15 pm     Reply with quote
lineart

This forum has inspired me in more ways than one. For one thing, seeing all of your work has made me picked up my pen and start drawing again. (Which I haven't done for years.)
CG has lured me away from drawing traditionally that I almost forgot how good it feels to draw using pen and paper.
I've been lurking for a long time here and I finally have the guts to post. Comments are greatly appreciated. (take it easy on me folks!)

Here's my site if you're interested. (and have some freetime to surf.)

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kad
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2002 5:22 pm     Reply with quote
I'm glad you got the inspiration to pick up the pen again! Some great stuff, real clean and nicely detailed.
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VanGoh
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PostPosted: Tue Mar 05, 2002 10:11 pm     Reply with quote
WOW! Tip Top quality works you got there! You can be my Sifu now! (Sifu means fatherly teacher in cantonese)
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Dekard
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2002 6:20 am     Reply with quote
Gorky, Nice lineart man, top notch, whats your secret?
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Awetopsy
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2002 9:59 am     Reply with quote
Whoa!!! I love the turtle thing at the bottom.. absolutely awesome..
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Kuren
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2002 10:20 am     Reply with quote
VanGoh - Just a lil tiny peeve here...Sifu is more literally a teacher. And Chinese people in the "old days" treated their teachers like fathers or mothers. It was expected/obligated to treat them like parents. But basically it just means teacher. Like in this day and age, you can have a sifu as a teacher for kung fu, but people will not treat him/her as a parent...unless like you're still living in medieval China. lol

gorky - The line art looks great! Very clean indeed. Small crits though. The dog holding the axe; the left hand I think should be turned forward so you can see a lil bit of the back of his hand. I think this'll match up with the hand on the right where you see a bit of the bottom of his fingers. The rider looks great, but I think his cheek bones are a slight unbalanced, unless you meant it that way. The thing he's riding; the arm on the left looks smaller than the right. A lil too small perhaps. The dragon looks like Spryo! LOL, that's not a bad thing or a crit. He looks like a retarded Spryo; doi doi..doiiiiiiiiii I can imagine him saying. The turtle looks kinda scared hehe...I think the first crit I gave to the dog holding the axe applies here as well. His left hand should be turned downwards a tad. Is he walking as well? Maybe move the leg on the right accordingly...but that's not a big deal, it might improve the impression of what he's doing through his body expressions.

You work for Namco? Damn...
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Hyptosis
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2002 11:07 am     Reply with quote
nice nice work, they look very good. Very pro and 'gamish'
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gorky
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 06, 2002 3:20 pm     Reply with quote
Thanks to your nice feedbacks and helpful crits. I know I still have along way to get back in shape and still need to shake off a lot of rust. I'll keep on drawing whenever I get some spare time going.
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