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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 9:31 am |
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Hello Sijuners =]
My apologies for not having posted here in such a long time, but I’ve been busy. You know how it is ;]
Aaanyway... I come bearing gifts =) The first one, I finished today. It is a picture of Heleane Mi Salain... beautiful, but ice cold, queen... scene taking place about four minutes after she murdered her father.
There are some perspective issues going on with the chair and the cage, that I haven't been able to fix because that's my weakest point... feel free to help me out =)
The second one was, ah, not so seriously intended ;] It was drawn partly for the people who had been sending me hatemails and trying to force me into stop drawing feminine men. I guess you can say I have a weird sense of humour. (I know his anatomy is somewhat screwed up, especially the arms - much too slender - I just haven’t had the time nor inclination to fix them yet ;] )
This text was attached to this image... it’s not aimed at you - unless you’re one of the hatemailers ;D - but I thought some people might like to read it anyway =)
"This picture is a gift for my supporters and anti-supporters. The pretty boys will never stop.
Use this picture in any way you want, as long as it's not commercial, and as long as you do not change it. Use it for roleplay, use it on your website, print it on your wall, or just use it as your desktop paper - it's my gift for you. Just remember to link back to me if it's online. And for those anti-supporters among you, feel free to print it on toilet paper and use it like /that/ if you want to. Just stop sending the results of those efforts to me.
Love you all, bests,
L."
Hugs and stuff...
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EviLToYLeT member
Member # Joined: 09 Aug 2000 Posts: 1216 Location: CA, USA
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 10:02 am |
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I like em both! Though....second one.. looks like some kind of twisted valentine thing ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Lunatique member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 3303 Location: Lincoln, California
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 11:42 am |
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Wow. I rarely see you do full scenes with backgrounds like that. It practically glows. Wonderful stuff. |
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Icannon member
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 2000 Posts: 597 Location: st.albert, AB, Canada
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 1:51 pm |
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sweetness. they're both great. the bottom of the bird cage almost seems non-existant, though.
i love those wings. |
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The Magic Pen member
Member # Joined: 05 Dec 2001 Posts: 321
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 2:05 pm |
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They are both extremly beutiful but the top is your best work yet and in my opnion one of the best digitaly airbrushed pictures I have ever seen. ![](images/smiles/icon_eek.gif) |
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Novacaptain member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 906 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 3:13 pm |
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Wow, these are wonderful - i think the second one is great, i love art with a purpouse, this'll probably rid you of all your mail-problems (not).
I think there would probably be a lot more blood on the first picture, especially on the blade, sleeves, dress, walls, chair, cat, bird etc. It's not like you can just cut someone's head off and wipe it up with a kleenex afterwards...no, it's messy work i tell you...very messy (i haven't tried BTW).
The reason why i said so is that it looked, firstly, like she had cut herself in the forehead...only later did i see the man's head on the floor.
The shadow on the wall looks odd to me. I'm not sure why...
What is that on the floor, behind her?
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Soulfuct member
Member # Joined: 20 Nov 2001 Posts: 120 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 3:24 pm |
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Linda I love the new one....I showed the bottom one to Brom btw
Keep the stunning work comming |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 4:44 pm |
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Enayla.. wow!! that first image is spectacular.. she looks completely evil... |
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Cicinimo member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2001 Posts: 705 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 7:32 pm |
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Can't say I read the other replies, so forgive me if I repeat anyone.
I like the first one, but I think it has some major composition problems. The bottem has way to much weight. Its still very nice, but you might want to work on that. I'd almost say totally get rid of the dead head :P (of course then the picture might loose some attachment to the story). You already mentioned the perspective/anatomy problems .
In my opinion the second is better. Looks like a Brom painting in your style.
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Kaete member
Member # Joined: 07 Nov 2001 Posts: 214 Location: North Carolina, USA
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 10:17 pm |
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Oh, I couldn't resist. Her hair is so silky it makes me want to reach out and touch it.
If this offends, just say the word and I'll erase it. ![](images/smiles/icon_razz.gif) |
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Malachi Maloney member
Member # Joined: 16 Oct 2001 Posts: 942 Location: Arizona
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 11:06 pm |
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I don't really care for the first one very much. It's kind of flat in my opinion.
The second one however, is awesome. Great work.
M |
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jabber member
Member # Joined: 22 Nov 2001 Posts: 235 Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada
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Posted: Sun Mar 03, 2002 11:38 pm |
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i love the second painting, rocky horror picture show all the way. wow. im just gonna sit n look at it for a while. thanks ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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grasshoppa member
Member # Joined: 09 Dec 2001 Posts: 57 Location: monterey
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 12:32 am |
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Love your stuff. hehe second one disturbs me,I thought is was a girl till I looked closer. Amazing hair as usual and I wish you would post more often. |
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SolarC member
Member # Joined: 23 Jul 2001 Posts: 274 Location: Barcelona
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 3:10 am |
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Hi Enayla.
You've done an excellent job rendering the scene and figures. I also like the color choices you've made. The only thing which makes me wonder is the lack of rhytm in most of your compositions, which gives the picture a sort of static feeling. Maybe it's intended? |
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Belisarius member
Member # Joined: 23 Jun 2000 Posts: 61 Location: Germany
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 3:13 am |
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Hello,
Great Work as always...
I cannot understand how people can criticise work of art and imagination by using hatemails. Nothing against constructive criticism but that goes too far. Even if people do not like what you do they do not have to llok at it, do they?
Keep the good work up |
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d.a.r.y.l. junior member
Member # Joined: 19 Dec 2001 Posts: 48 Location: sweden
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 4:32 am |
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very nice. but the womans right boob is like a balloon
second pic is wayyy to transsexual for my taste but nice rendered.. |
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n8 member
Member # Joined: 12 Jan 2000 Posts: 791 Location: Sydney, NSW, Australia
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 7:31 am |
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hehehe...very creative kaete
that second pic of the dood in drag is quite amusing...although quite disturbing...amusing..hehe ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
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Anthony member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 1577 Location: Winter Park, FLA
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 11:34 am |
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Nice rendering per norm for you. The guy looks like Sofia Marceau(sp?). Weird stuff :] |
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Rattmouth member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 83 Location: Raleigh, NC , USA
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 11:42 am |
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I love that the first pic has such an involved narrative attached to it. You definitely could have presented it without telling the story and it would be just as interesting. I agree with the folks who have said that the composition isn't as strong as the second pic. That second one is tremendous. Look at those wings! Craziness. Hell, I'd hit on him if I didn't think he might poison me or something.
Give us a detail image of those wings, please. Or even a bigger version.
Thanks. Keep it up.
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immi member
Member # Joined: 22 Oct 1999 Posts: 629 Location: vancouver
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 1:25 pm |
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Hey Enayla. Great work...as always. I'm a big fan. Anyways, just wanted to let you know that we'll be using The Devil May Care as the Picture of the Day atGFX Artistin the next day or 2. Hope thats ok. dave |
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Enayla member
Member # Joined: 26 Nov 2000 Posts: 1217 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 1:57 pm |
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Thanks everyone =D I am going to fix the composition on the first one. I've just received great help back at my own forums and I think I've figured out what was wrong.
You know how it is when you can't figure out ANYTHING to change, and yet you KNOW something is seriously messed up, right?
Well... I'm hoping I'll fix it now.
Bigger version of the Devil May Care image =)
The picture was Brom inspired, indeed (and not from japanese rock, like some people elswewhere suggested)... and I'm considering making it available for print as soon as I figure out a good way to charge money from waaaay over here in Sweden =(
(Edit) Dave, I forgot to say - it's quite all right, and I'm very flattered =D thank you!
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Ralph Manis junior member
Member # Joined: 10 Jan 2002 Posts: 3 Location: Rehoboth Beach, Delaware USA
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 2:52 pm |
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I think they are all excellent! |
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Leo member
Member # Joined: 24 Oct 1999 Posts: 328 Location: Russia
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Posted: Mon Mar 04, 2002 6:44 pm |
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fbeepk! That's really scary! Enayla, your technique is improving no doubt here but you're really falling into the dark side ... Lasto beth nin, tolo dan na ngalad.
-leo |
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