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Kari Christensen
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 27, 2002 8:48 pm     Reply with quote
Here's the pic after a little revision.


[ February 27, 2002: Message edited by: Kari Christensen ]


[ February 28, 2002: Message edited by: Kari Christensen ]
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Morbid Guy
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 2:08 am     Reply with quote
This has a very nice mood and creepy forboding, like something is about to happen. Really nice colours and the guys face looks great. His arm looks just bit too long tho but it's cool nontheless.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 2:18 am     Reply with quote
well done. I like that slim dude. cool pose. that arm is very nice
I dont understand the blue stuff and the reflections on it
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Kari Christensen
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 8:43 am     Reply with quote
Thanks Morbid- I think you are right about the arm, I shortened it in the second image. Is that noticeably better?

Geelimp- the blue stuff is supposed be an oily fluid coming from the machine. I took out some of the blue of the liquid in the second image. Hopefully that reads better.
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Morbid Guy
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 4:00 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah, I think it looks better. The upper arm and the forearm areas look the same length. I think it might look more right if the foearm was a touch longer than the upperarm (excluding shoulder), but I am being extremely nitpicky here. Good job.
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 4:51 pm     Reply with quote
I liked this one before and it looks even better now! =D I did like the dimness of the background in the darker version though. =\
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