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Kari Christensen member
Member # Joined: 05 Jun 2001 Posts: 192 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2002 8:48 pm |
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Here's the pic after a little revision.
[ February 27, 2002: Message edited by: Kari Christensen ]
[ February 28, 2002: Message edited by: Kari Christensen ] |
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Morbid Guy member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2000 Posts: 277 Location: England
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 2:08 am |
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This has a very nice mood and creepy forboding, like something is about to happen. Really nice colours and the guys face looks great. His arm looks just bit too long tho but it's cool nontheless. |
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ftgjcf member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2000 Posts: 184
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 2:18 am |
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well done. I like that slim dude. cool pose. that arm is very nice
I dont understand the blue stuff and the reflections on it |
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Kari Christensen member
Member # Joined: 05 Jun 2001 Posts: 192 Location: Rhode Island, USA
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 8:43 am |
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Thanks Morbid- I think you are right about the arm, I shortened it in the second image. Is that noticeably better?
Geelimp- the blue stuff is supposed be an oily fluid coming from the machine. I took out some of the blue of the liquid in the second image. Hopefully that reads better. |
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Morbid Guy member
Member # Joined: 19 Oct 2000 Posts: 277 Location: England
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 4:00 pm |
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Yeah, I think it looks better. The upper arm and the forearm areas look the same length. I think it might look more right if the foearm was a touch longer than the upperarm (excluding shoulder), but I am being extremely nitpicky here. Good job. |
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clarion junior member
Member # Joined: 27 Feb 2002 Posts: 6
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2002 4:51 pm |
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I liked this one before and it looks even better now! =D I did like the dimness of the background in the darker version though. =\ |
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