Sijun Forums :: View topic - Vampire character design and cybernetic babe

maceface · Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 8:59 pm

hey everyone...havent posted a pic in a while...so i hope this can redeem some of that lost time etc etc. anyways this is a character concept pic for a game that Soulfuct studios is going to put together. The game is still in PREstages...so im sorta setting the scene/feel for the game. hope you all like it and post crits/comments!
thanks

oh and BTW...yes his jaw is ripped off

oh yeah this is another pencil rendering of a chick nudity? i dunno

[ February 21, 2002: Message edited by: maceface ]

Soulfuct · Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 9:06 pm

Saw this in it's early stages and DAMN Mark he turned out shithot.

very high tech, pirate style going down.
wait till we give this badboy more life

we will care for him and love him
mauahaha

yeah anyways great work bro.

maceface · Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2002 1:37 pm

oof im gonna bump it so i can get some crits

Soulfuct · Posted: Sat Feb 23, 2002 2:24 pm

Mark I don't understand sijun sometimes...these are STUNNING bro....and threads with artwork thats lacking get post after post

I guess its just the luck of the draw when you post and who replies.

Anyways dun let it get you down man these rawk.

tek9z · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 8:06 am

nice work!
but couldn't resist a repaint
sorry!

maceface · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 10:52 am

heya repaint is cool! and thats a great thanks for liking my art and spending time on the repaint.

Highfive · Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 11:44 pm

Jeez, maceface, what is it with you and nude girls?

LOL, so wanted to say that one day!

That jawless soldier is awesome! The twin gurkha knives, magazine pockets, the pistol and his spats are his best features. His stance is great as well. Easily my favourite character that you've drawn.

The girl is good as well, although the naked girl with kinky boots connected to wiring idea has been done heaps before. Also, her head appears to be facing the viewer's right, but her nose is pointing directly ahead. Might be ideal to fix this, I guess.

Your skills are improving fast

maceface · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 1:26 pm

ahahaha you got me back

thanks for the reply highfive...yeah the chick has some problems that could be fixed...and i think the vamp up top is prolly one of my coolest characters

thanks again man

ladybug · junior member Member # Joined: 23 Feb 2002 Posts: 7

That jawless soldier is very rugged and seems to be rebelling against the recent elven pictures ive seen here lately. Your style seems brash and somewhat introverted but i like the irony in the second picture.

Soulfuct · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 3:00 pm

quote:
Originally posted by ladybug:
That jawless soldier is very rugged and seems to be rebelling against the recent elven pictures ive seen here lately. Your style seems brash and somewhat introverted but i like the irony in the second picture.

Hey no offence lady but relating the word *introvert* to a person because they don't draw flowers and happy crap that rings your *pretty little bell* is kinda lame.

Couldnt resist

Gimbal8 · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 3:53 pm

I really like the jawless guy. Very well done and great attention to detail. I understand these are concept images so there may not be a need to take these all the way to completion, but I'd love to see him under a stronger light source. The multiple layers of clothing and straps are missing all the shadows that would bring more depth the the picture.

Jucas · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 4:27 pm

Nice stuff, not as good as some that I have seen from you but nice none the less.

Crits;
This girl doesn't have a neck, I know her shoulders are covering her neck partially, but we should be able to see more. There should be a space between her neck and arms.

The guy seems too short. Almost out of proportion. Like his torso is too long, but his legs aren't long enough. Or his torso is too big.

Good work,

Mermalior · Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2002 7:25 pm

Only two words: great works