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Author   Topic : "Aluna - my 2nd bit of CG art"
Arc][Pello
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 4:17 pm     Reply with quote
She started out as a whole figure but i added so much detail to the face and hair that it became a seperate image all together, hope you like it.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 4:20 pm     Reply with quote
can you guys see it? damn freeserve keeps messing me about.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:17 pm     Reply with quote
the girls eyes are too far apart, there should be one "eye" distance in the middle of the two eyes. All you do is take the right eye, measure that distance, and put that space in between the two eyes.

Also your mouth is too small. The creases at the edge of the mouth should measure almost exactly into the middle of each eye. If you measure vertically from the edge of each side of the mouth, and go up, you'll see that the middle section of each eye should match up. Just check any mugshot photograph of a real person and you'll see what i mean.

Other than that, I think your colour scheme is pretty cool, the hair is probably the best thing done on this piece.

Hope my comments helped
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:30 pm     Reply with quote
hey thanx, yeah the mouth is all wrong on this, but im still getting used to doing faces and all. thanx for all those measurment rules, ill have to use them in the future.
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