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Topic : "Mandy Moore, by me and Roundeye" |
Dr. Bang member
Member # Joined: 04 Dec 2001 Posts: 1425 Location: DENHAAG, HOLLAND
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 12:43 am |
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Hi, here's a pic of MandyMoore, done with reference but still takes me too much time! I'm embarrased to say how long. I learned quite alot from it though. I can imagine how much more i can learn from drawing from real life!
Coment and critique are welcome! Thanks
- To see Roundeye's wip version and the ref, check out EPOEWFFA 2002 Take care!
[ February 24, 2002: Message edited by: Dr. Bang ] |
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Lunatique member
Member # Joined: 27 Jan 2001 Posts: 3303 Location: Lincoln, California
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 4:41 am |
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Good job!
The only thing I'd say that jumps out at me is that you might want to soften the tip of the hair strands, and the highlights on the hair(the actual color used for highlight)would look better if they tapered as they blend into the brown of the hair?
Working from life is 10X harder(full color portrait). I get nervous just thinking about my past experiences. |
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-Tepox- member
Member # Joined: 25 Mar 2001 Posts: 352 Location: Finland
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 5:21 am |
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Heya! It's Very nicely done! Only her left eye is a little too far awar from her right. That's just one thing bothering me. |
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Duk3Nuk4n junior member
Member # Joined: 09 Feb 2001 Posts: 48
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 8:05 am |
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Good Job, she looks abit older in the pic. It doesnt look lively, perhaps less highlights would help. Ahh... idont know.... good job |
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Tarandon member
Member # Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 152 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 11:31 am |
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Who gives a hoot how long it took you. I think it's great. Keep it up. |
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Bump member
Member # Joined: 15 Feb 2002 Posts: 78
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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2002 11:46 am |
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Looks good actually.
Critique:
She looks way older. Lighting problems (probably from the reference). Her arm looks unnatural. Eyes look weird (I guess it's because of what Tepox said).
Anyway very good try, portraits can be really tricky, specialy from bad photo reference. |
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