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BlacKnight
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Joined: 07 Feb 2002
Posts: 22
Location: Qu�bec,Canada

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 2:00 pm     Reply with quote
hi all,

first i must say this forum is very great n theres some damn good draws here!

ok,now i want that u give me comments 4 my first work!!

Plz if u know some tips to get that pic better let me know im very OPEN!!!!!
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Gil Agud�n
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Joined: 14 Feb 2002
Posts: 103

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 2:22 pm     Reply with quote
nice picture,is it for a comicbook??
may i do some comments??
-i think the hands r just 2 big, (or r them suppose 2 be so big? i mean i don�t know the character)
-the forearms r also 2 long, specially the left one.
-the fingers of the right hand look rather peculiar 2 me...

[ February 21, 2002: Message edited by: Gil Agud�n ]
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The Magic Pen
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Joined: 05 Dec 2001
Posts: 321

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 2:25 pm     Reply with quote
It looks like it is a rather good drawing but the coloring is not so good especially the background. You should post the inks and see if someone will color it for you.
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BlacKnight
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Location: Qu�bec,Canada

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 2:31 pm     Reply with quote
I dont want someone do it 4 me!
Its my first work so let me the time to learn a bit in coloring!
Btw im here to learn!!!!!!!!!!
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Ripelly
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Joined: 05 Oct 2001
Posts: 113
Location: Finland

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 4:48 pm     Reply with quote
tahts ur 1rst work? i r 2 b impressive.
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sCriBBler aka Jito
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Joined: 13 Jul 2001
Posts: 74
Location: france

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 8:01 pm     Reply with quote
nice style
the hands are too big

could you redraw this gun in big
with bunch of details?
i really love it
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Tinusch
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Joined: 25 Dec 1999
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Location: Rhode Island, USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 9:23 pm     Reply with quote
Did you do the picture or just the coloring?
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Kaete
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Joined: 07 Nov 2001
Posts: 214
Location: North Carolina, USA

PostPosted: Thu Feb 21, 2002 9:26 pm     Reply with quote
Very nice picture. You've obviously got the "comic book" style going on. The main problem seems to be the hands. They're about twice as big as the need to be.

*thumbs up*
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