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DiXter
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 Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 4:12 pm |
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yup!
a girl.. and a waterfall..
Sucky ref I used:
I might go back nad fix aome things on this later.. There's some parts that I'm not quite pleased with..
[ February 15, 2002: Message edited by: DiXter ] |
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balistic
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 4:33 pm |
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This is some of your better work Dixter! One suggestion: with the bright light to the left, I would expect that side of her hair to be lit more intensly. Here's an example of what I mean:
http://www.bprince.com/FreakQueen.jpg
[ February 15, 2002: Message edited by: balistic ] |
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The Magic Pen
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 4:52 pm |
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| Looks good bro! |
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swampbug
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| Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2002 5:35 pm |
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nice dixter.. She seams to be lit from a light sourse from our right. the yellowish light. It seams unnatural unless it was a photoshoot with guys with lights pointed at her. In other words, She kinda looks like a cut out on a blue background, and she really isnt there.
I would suggest to make the lighting more true to the natural moon light in your scene
Maybe even if it meant making her darker over all.
I love those rocks in the Background!... good job.! |
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bellie
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 4:54 am |
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get dixter thats dope shiznit  yeh well my only crit is that the waterfall.. seems kinda plasticy ? i think its the highlights.. i dunno.. seems so smooth `` thats just my two cents.. keep it up ! apart form it i luv it i luv it aniwais.. bye |
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DiXter
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| Posted: Sat Feb 16, 2002 9:03 am |
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Thanks all.. Iknow she looks kinda cut in.
But it was my intention, sort of. |
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Malachi Maloney
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| Posted: Sun Feb 17, 2002 9:04 pm |
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Great job DIX! 
I love this.
One small suggestion though.........
Please stop painting these beautiful pin-ups as I don't need anymore competition then I already have.
Take it easy bro,
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Yuri, Shallow Dreamz
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2002 2:24 am |
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Yeah! nice work!
I think other than the lights casted on the girl is abit confusing(the hair seems not able to catch the lights)
the rest is great!
=}
Pls correct me if i am wrong~
(I am absorbing!!! Learning as i see!!!)
[ February 18, 2002: Message edited by: Yuri, Shallow Dreamz ] |
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dARCKLOWN
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| Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2002 3:42 am |
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| Hell yeah man very clean and nice colours |
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Mr. Heiesuke Oda
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| Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2002 4:01 am |
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| I love the imagination used on the background it makes this picture come alive, I would agree that there should be some light coming from the left side on her hair. |
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