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Topic : "Wasteland(ish) Girl -[3D]-" |
Briareos member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 392 Location: CA
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Icannon member
Member # Joined: 13 Sep 2000 Posts: 597 Location: st.albert, AB, Canada
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 3:36 am |
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sweet! i like the color scheme and the way you've created a stylized 3d face, which is rare. i think the hands are too small and kind of odd shaped, though. and no finger nails? |
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Xyster21 member
Member # Joined: 13 Apr 2001 Posts: 204 Location: California USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 3:53 am |
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Awesome... almost looks like someone whipped out 3d studio or something on it :P
Love the way you did her clothing especially
Good job there ![](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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Bilbo member
Member # Joined: 31 May 2000 Posts: 356 Location: Israel
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:00 am |
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this one's great. i like the model (it IS a 3d model, right?) except for the hands problem mentioned by Icannnon.. nice work on the textures and lighting. |
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gArGOyLe^ member
Member # Joined: 11 Jan 2002 Posts: 454 Location: USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:19 am |
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I like that alot! Would it be wrong for me to ask for a quickie tutorial ![](images/smiles/icon_smile.gif) |
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Arpan junior member
Member # Joined: 24 Dec 2001 Posts: 16 Location: NJ, USA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:20 am |
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I'm assuming that is 3d. What program was it modelled and rendered in? It looks great, especially the soft, smooth render. I would change the hand position a bit, the pose seems a little stiff-like a general "poser pose". |
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Briareos member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 392 Location: CA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 5:51 am |
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I forgot fingernails LOL!
It is 3d... thats why it says 3d in the title... 3dsmax. some post work in PS, but its a render ![](images/smiles/icon_wink.gif) |
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Awetopsy member
Member # Joined: 04 Oct 2000 Posts: 3028 Location: Kelowna
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 8:49 am |
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I like it too but I think id like to see her in a more dynamic pose.. like say running.. climbing into a dune buggie or something like that...
still its a great render. |
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Marakaz Buzjuz member
Member # Joined: 08 Jan 2002 Posts: 63 Location: Amsterdam
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 11:25 am |
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Really cool pic, 2 bad the pose is so static and unreal.. but everything else is great! |
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NextGen member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2001 Posts: 149
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 2:03 pm |
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this looks great. It has a sort of Final Fantasy Feel... did you go too far with the texture on Her right hand? I liked the other head you had those gogles on it? but this one is great to. i think i liked the hair the most on the other one. |
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Briareos member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 392 Location: CA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 3:35 pm |
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This is my first 3d character, doing a kick ass dynamic pose isnt something i couldnt do just yet. Its really not set up right to make a dynamic pose, or anything. And the hands suck, but I have redone them alot, and I wanna move on
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Dr. Bang member
Member # Joined: 04 Dec 2001 Posts: 1425 Location: DENHAAG, HOLLAND
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 4:44 pm |
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duuuuuuuuuude! how long did it took you to do her? ....to create her that is. |
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Briareos member
Member # Joined: 24 May 2001 Posts: 392 Location: CA
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 5:34 pm |
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about a 1.5 months. too long! |
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Dr. Bang member
Member # Joined: 04 Dec 2001 Posts: 1425 Location: DENHAAG, HOLLAND
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 7:37 pm |
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it would be much more worth if you could post several close up shot of her face I really want to see more shots of this pic. |
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Akukage member
Member # Joined: 13 Oct 2001 Posts: 51 Location: SE Michigan
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 7:50 pm |
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no one's mentioned this yet, but the nose looks wierd, like its just a rounded out cylinder... other than that I like the whole thing |
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roundeye member
Member # Joined: 21 Mar 2001 Posts: 1059 Location: toronto
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Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2002 7:58 pm |
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I MENTIONED IT! |
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roundeye member
Member # Joined: 21 Mar 2001 Posts: 1059 Location: toronto
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2002 12:05 am |
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i LOVE the face and the costume design! awesome, could use more defined nostrils perhaps but great character!!! |
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Ghandaiah member
Member # Joined: 16 Jan 2002 Posts: 88 Location: Mequon, WI
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Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2002 12:16 am |
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I also really like the face. My only crits are the fingers, which do look a bit strange, and her left foot is blurry - I know it's probably supposed to be a focus thing, but it just looks a tad odd for some unexplainable reason.
Really nice 3d work, though. |
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Dr.Squirley member
Member # Joined: 25 Apr 2001 Posts: 219 Location: Here
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 12:55 am |
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Everything seems good, except in places clothing blends in skin, like on her forearm or above her belly button. Hahaah i just wrote belly button... ![](images/smiles/icon_razz.gif) |
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Aimok member
Member # Joined: 31 Oct 2000 Posts: 64 Location: Hamburg,Germany
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 2:33 am |
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wow,
the face is awesome!
the rest, too.
Nice mangaesque 3dStuff-
U need a good Backround, per haps u could paint it and put things together...
great |
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Tarandon member
Member # Joined: 19 Nov 2001 Posts: 152 Location: Toronto
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Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2002 8:30 am |
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Alright, everyone gave smashing reviews, so I'm gonna do my worst. The model is good, I saw this earlier in the WiP section. In WiP, it was in a rather basic pose, where you assured us it would look better in its final pose. I don't see what's so much better, it's basically the same pose. I think you've missed the context/mood of the picture. We have no idea why she is where she is, how she got there (no footprints) or why she is standing as if she is trying to fly. Since you now have a model you can do pretty much anything with, I think you should create some sort of survival context and place her in it. Maybe hiding behind a rock, in a fire fight, or scrounging for food etc. If she's supposed to be in the wasteland, make us believe it.
I hope I helped, Toodles. |
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