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surferboi · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 11:08 am

after a lot of hard work and time i think its done.

c&c wanted and welcome.

original resolution image 4000x2600 http://personal.atl.bellsouth.net/lig/a/l/alwarr/pam19large.jpg
430kb

thankyou

mucha · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 11:39 am

Hey bob - its time for your chromosoom check

MoleculeMan · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 4:10 pm

my only problem is with the teeth. Seems like they are sharp or something. I would go back and try to define thier edges better. nice portrait though.

jake

jabber · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 5:06 pm

this is looking like a fantastic start, but there is something wrong with the chest area. it looks almost as though her breasts are down by her stomach. (which is most like not the case

i think its the shading. i think the teeth are a bit strong, and the right eye is a bit to dark compared to the left.

i think it would be great to see what u do with this. keep up the good work!

J-D Leon · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 7:51 pm

eye: guys pay attation to details: her left eyes is un-natual, try to make it bigger at the area where her eye is pointting at. cuz thats the outtest part of her eye. so logically it is the begger compare to other area of ther eye. let me show u.

teeth: too sharp, u know what i mean?

ok. i color it first. let the battle begin.

Bob the Newt · Posted: Fri Jan 25, 2002 11:52 pm

yah she swallows

pro-phet · Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2002 12:16 am

ahm.... i just started doin portraits but i think theres something wrong with her left (our right) eye. i know what, but i am unable to explain in english, sorry.

Death Dealer · Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2002 12:33 am

good obsorvation the eye to our right should be smaller the the one on the left.

surferboi · Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2002 12:44 am

do you mean the shaping of the eyelids or the iris is too large?