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Death Dealer
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 11:53 am     Reply with quote
Here is something I've ben working on during the holidays, I'm not 100% happy with it something still bothers me about it.
oh well here it is....



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Cos
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:16 pm     Reply with quote
Very cool man, really like the face. Think the body area is a little flat tho, some areas could of used some lighting from the fire in her hand, like the breast plate for example.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:25 pm     Reply with quote
Awesome. I agree, some areas go flat. I'd really like to know how you managed that border. Its so delicate and so perfect.


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Quasar
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:33 pm     Reply with quote
OMG that's the most amazing fantasy painting that has ever been posted at SIJUN in all my years!@!!! Damn Death Dealer that seals the deal for me you are a master painter..it doesn't even look digital in the small painting...God you do good work always but you really out did yourself on this one



[edit] you really should be doing magic cards.. it's big bucks you know!!

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Son of Cos
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:38 pm     Reply with quote
I really hate to be posative but I have to admit this is fucking awsome!! It could have done without the upclose because people like me can steal your technique and make more money now ,thanks!!

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:54 pm     Reply with quote
im no amazing artist or anything, but i like it alot, i just dont see how you could be disapointed with it. its hella fantasy and that rox. if you are looking to make it better the only thing i would suggest would be to make the fire coming from her left hand more defined, and looking like fire.
the fire doesnt look real to me.

but besides that its awesome.
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Death Dealer
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 1:58 pm     Reply with quote
Son of Cos I really hate to be a realist but I have to admit It took me more than a couple of days to perfect this technique...

ps: ya I make alot of $ working a Burger King.....
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Daijoobu
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 3:04 pm     Reply with quote
Wow wow wow...I'd really love to see a tutorial for this one!!!

Something that bothers me about this piece is her chest-area and especially the breast plates. They seem flat and are kinda awkward-looking. And maybe the lighting on her left arm (the arm with the hand holding the fire), it makes her arm look flat and unrealistic.

But aside from that, its an awesome picture.
I'm in awe.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 3:07 pm     Reply with quote
Thats really good!!! Love the face...
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Anthony
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 3:30 pm     Reply with quote
Looks great! Her left arm looks like it died-some more vibrancy on it will help. The breast area is very flat. In general it's beautiful though!
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 3:36 pm     Reply with quote
oooOOOoooooh... that's nice.

Looks a bit flat in places though. Also, the left arm looks a bit.. odd. Otherwise, very nice indeed.
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Malachi Maloney
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 4:04 pm     Reply with quote
Dude, that is awesome.
Do you have a web site?
The only crit I have isn't even with you painting. Just post those big ol detail shots as links from now on would ya?

Again, great work.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 4:40 pm     Reply with quote
Oops.
Double posted. =/

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 5:05 pm     Reply with quote
Extremely beautiful. I like the effects you got with the fire and ice. There is some flatness going on, and the cape/robe wraps around her neck is looking stiff.
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Man With No Name
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 6:40 pm     Reply with quote
Burger King, huh? Damn, they get all the best artists.....

How frickin long does it take you to do this?
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 10:56 pm     Reply with quote
Awesome! One crit: her left forearm is too long in relation to her upper arm.
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Bobby Digital
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 27, 2001 11:16 pm     Reply with quote
Wow, you did a great job! Truly amazing. The only thing I would've done differently is her cape at the bottom of the picture. It's a bit too symmetrical down there. Otherwise it's just awesome, I love it!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 12:44 am     Reply with quote
img not image to post images

and you have to be insane not to like that. it is simply amazing. i love the smoke stuff that is coming from her hand and staff. the rendering of her skin is fantastic too. please post more stuff
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 1:34 am     Reply with quote
Wow, D.D! I thought your linework was good, but this colour painting is incredible! As ppl have said before, the flames from her hand and the way they curl across to the ice staff looks very nice. All the curls and swirls inside it make it look so good.

The girl's hair waves in the air in a nice way, too. Only crit is - why only one ear-ring?
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 5:35 am     Reply with quote
Love it. Only comment is that mayber the hand with the fire around it needs to be brighter for all that light source there - just looks like that to me.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 8:49 am     Reply with quote
AWESOME work... the ONLY thing that is bothering me is the fact that the breast dont look like they belong to her... it looks like a breast plate with 2 big balls glued to here...
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 11:44 am     Reply with quote
That's gotta to the stupidest crtique ive ever heard congradulations wigin ...
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 4:55 pm     Reply with quote
=P cilicone&fantasy like female. gotta love that
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 6:28 pm     Reply with quote
Yeah I have to agree, this is absolutely fantastic.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 10:02 pm     Reply with quote
Fantastic!!!!!
There is only one thing wrong. Her collar
bones are too low. Even with pushed up boobs,
she doesn't have the correct amount of "chest"
above her boobs to her shoulders.
A minimum of 1/2 of her hand should be the
distance between the very top of her boobies
to the bottom of her collar bone.
If you fix this, It will be perfect!!!
Great Job!!!!!
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 28, 2001 10:58 pm     Reply with quote
This is really stunning man. She is so gorgeous and mystical
keep them comming.
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Death Dealer
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 29, 2001 12:21 am     Reply with quote
lol
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2002 8:47 am     Reply with quote
Thanks all for the nice coments.....
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2002 8:55 am     Reply with quote
oh man thats nice.

Forgive me if these comments have already been said:

Her pecs need to show a bit. Clavicals look odd[ly lit].

The fire bearing hand/arm lacks lighting to make it convincing to me.
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Phil
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 03, 2002 10:42 am     Reply with quote
Wow! Nice quality work. I like it.
I like the entire image and the composition is wonderful. I think what might be
bothering you is the fire in her left hand is
not casting enough light. Maybe add a little
lighting effects to her left arm.

That's my 2 cents.

Phil
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