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Christer · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 1:24 pm

.. just something other than what I usually post here. Which is mostly Conan stuff, hehe.. Done in photoshop, no reference used.

It's kind of an 'everlasting work in progress' thing.. I keep coming back to this one, can't seem to get it done. Should I work some more on it, or leave it as is...?

Your crits and comments would be very welcome

-Christer

EDIT - I have made a little update on her mouth.. better now?

[ January 14, 2002: Message edited by: Christer ]

blck_productions · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 1:44 pm

mouth is to big in comparement to the face...
Adjust just that and it `ll look astoniching.

gLitterbug · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 2:27 pm

I agree that the mouth is really big, but me likes it. Imagine what she can put in there

Joking aside. I love it, really, I like the color scheme and thinking of it I pretty like all of it. The tatoo-stuff looks cool and I also find her attractive :P

A piece I�d hang on my wall.

Drawnblud · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 9:24 pm

Your style is WONDERFUL, but I have to agree with the others. The mouth really throws the beauty of the rest of the pic. The hair and eyes are beautiful!!

Indian_Prophet · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 9:46 pm

This is pretty good. I don't know too much about the mouth though because everyone is different, I have see women with fairly large mouths like this.

Christer, I noticed most of your previous posts (the pictures) are no longer available, do you have any plans to upload them to another site?

Peace

Christer · Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2002 11:14 pm

Thanks for the comments people, and so I think I will try to make the mouth a tad smaller... It hasn't bothered me, but one tends to go a little "blind" to such things after working a something for a while. That's why it's so great to get good feedback!

Thanks again,

Christer

Marvel · Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 4:07 am

I don't think the mouth is too large, it's quite perfect. What I would change however is the position and the shape of the eyes - they seem to be a bit too high (or I'd rather say her forhead is too low) and they're too round (and not sharp enough for my tastes). Also her right eye (the one on left) is too much to the left - just take a look at the position of her nose and compare the right eye with left one (making sense here?)

Still, I like the image a lot; perhaps adding some other shade than brownish to the image might make it even more appealing to the eye.

[ January 15, 2002: Message edited by: Marvel ]

Awetopsy · Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 2:36 pm

whoa!!! I know a girl that looks just like that... creepy!!! You pics a hottie tho..

Qjackson · Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2002 10:33 pm

It's all done in gold colors. It remindes me of a fairy. What did you have in mind when you drew this? Or was it random?

Christer · Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2002 1:30 am

For those who may not have noticed, I have updated the pic slightly to make her mouth a little smaller. Thanks for the help with that one..!:)

Indian_Prophet - Thanks, one example of someone with pretty damn big lips: Angelina Jolie. It almost looks freaky from some angles, hehe. But I agree with what people said, they were a little too big, so I fixed that..

Regarding my other pictures, I have a site on the way, where you can see them and other stuff..

Marvel - Thanks for great feedback! Yes, you are making sense, and I will take your comments into consideration. I actually wanted a kind of golden/brownish feeling to it, but as you say, adding another color variation could be nice indeed.

Qjackson - Actually, the picture was originally supposed to be a portrait of Freya (Fr�ya in Norwegian), goddess of love and fertility in old norse mythology. But I can see the fairy connection too.. :)

-Christer