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Scott Robertson · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 8:19 am

Hello All,

Here is an image I am almost complete with. I thought I would share it along the way. I'm still planning to add some more interest in the lighthouse area, plants, people and more architectural details. It is a little sparse right now. Hope you enjoy it, comments always more than welcome.

drawthrough.com

LOco · junior member Member # Joined: 05 Jan 2002 Posts: 16

wow.. i love those wings.. the sea is good to.. the only thing i can point to is the cliff which look a bit...hmm.. dunno how to discribe it.. they look like a paper wall?

but i like it alot

Vesuvius · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 8:50 am

the width of either the near or the far wing should be adjusted slightly to make them more close in resemblence (despite perspective effects) and the perspective on the building, although difficult to judge, seems slightly different that that of the cliffs. In general it is very well done, with beautiful detail and color though.

Icannon · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 1:12 pm

that's neato. the front wings look out of perspective, but that could be my eyes lying to you\me. i love the sleekness, and you handled the transperancy awesomely.

sadman · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 1:29 pm

nice!!! I love the water and the the view...
I just find a little hard to read the buildings...maby is just me...
but like you said, you are not done yet.
...and also is very clean, sharp and smooth
very cool

Derek · member Member # Joined: 23 Apr 2001 Posts: 139

Scott
Curious about your perspective choices. Always seems extreme and exaggerated. In some pics it works, in others it's not as effective. Sometimes elements are out completely. Do you work through it first or eyeball it?

Shiro_tengu · Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 6:04 pm

beautiful

Quasar · member Member # Joined: 01 Oct 2001 Posts: 355

The building in the background doesnt seem to work for me. I hate telling you that cause im not sure how to fix what is bothering me.

Over-all it looks real nice though !

[edit] I think I know what it is. When I look at it my brain can't figire out what exactly I am looking at it. The first thing I seen when I looked at the image was that it was some kind of cd player because of the refelctive disk shape in the center ... Ehh it might just be me but I just dont think the building design is working.

[ January 13, 2002: Message edited by: Quasar ]