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nomad junior member
Member # Joined: 19 May 2001 Posts: 47 Location: new zealand
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 3:16 am |
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OK, not much to say about these really...crits & comments welcome:
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madmouth member
Member # Joined: 19 Dec 2001 Posts: 180 Location: elsewhere
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 8:20 am |
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for the first one, either put more shading in, vary the line width, or put a less neutral colour in the background because it affects the drawing very much. the limbs are a tad thin but that's alright. the second piece is much better and the only thing I must ask is why the man has no penis. a male should have one, right? people seem to neglect this fact |
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SporQ member
Member # Joined: 22 Sep 2000 Posts: 639 Location: Columbus, Ohio
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2002 8:50 am |
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only crit i have is that the arrow is noched too high. make it a little more level and itll be cool. both are great pics though |
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