[topeira]

well, no special requests. just comment. it is almost done. there are a few more things i wish to add but not to big of a things. feel free to trash it or comment whateva' u like



here is the original black and white sketch. i think it even looks better than the color ver. if someone thinks he can get a better result with that lame sketch than he can take a go at it.

it's in this URL - http://members.nana.co.il/planet/topeira//monsterBW%2Ejpg

[ December 26, 2001: Message edited by: topeira ]

[S4Sb]

Hey, that's pretty cool already. I can't believe that this fell almost to page two abyss. But there are a few things I would change.
- The stone doesn't look like a stone.
- The monsters head is lacking something. When first looking at it I couldn't figure out if his head is from a fish, a dinosour or a lizard.

The lighting is pretty cool already. Although I can't figure out where the light is coming from. Keep working on it. It is really cool already!

[S4Sb]

Oh, the coloured version didn't show up during my last post. So I did a small paintover over your b&w moster. Disregarding my own advise and making the head even more vague.

Your coloured version is a even a lot better than your b&w thingie. He has teeth =) And the rocks look like rocks. good work!

[topeira]

thanks s4sb for the comments. but unfortunatly i cant see your overpaint.

in the colored ver u can clearly see where the light comes from, i hope...