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Michael Clarke
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 Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 9:57 pm |
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Here's a painting i recently finished for a holiday gift. This is a fairly quick one.. I think it took around 4 hours total. For now i'm considering it done.. but i wouldn't mind hearing some critiques.
Made in Painter 6.
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Soulfuct
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| Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 10:36 pm |
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This is a very subtle piece....but its gorgeous.Maby texture the rocks more?
You have some really nice work on your website. |
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jabber
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| Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 12:44 am |
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| the rocks dont look wet. thats all i can see, but it looks great otherwise. |
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Switch
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| Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 1:17 am |
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| I love the forms you've avhieved with the lighting of the rocks. Only thing that seems missing is a horizon - it seems a clear enough day for one. |
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Michael Clarke
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| Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 5:26 am |
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Thanks for the critiques all... very useful suggestions.
Soulfuct - I agree the rocks could use more texture, especially the ones in the foreground. Thanks for the kind words on my website stuff. 
Jabber - good point about the lack of wetness on the rocks.. I think I need a few more shiny highlights to take care of that.
Switch - I fuzzed out the horizon to give it better atmospheric depth.. but you are right - on a clear day like that the horizon would probably be more defined.
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