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Mindsiphon
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 10:42 am     Reply with quote
This is a race portrait for an elven female.


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Liser Studios
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Joined: 14 Oct 2001
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 11:34 am     Reply with quote
the drawing and CG are really really good... but there's one huge problem...
she's cross eyed!
lol
unless you want her to be crosseyed, but i was guessing you didn't.
other than that, very nice pic. nice indeed.
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root88
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 5:52 pm     Reply with quote
Her eyes were the very first thing I noticed too.
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Cicinimo
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Joined: 03 Mar 2001
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:04 pm     Reply with quote
I always appreciate your color choices raist :-). I have to agree with the others, however. Her eyes are a crossed. And I also think her ears would look better more pointy . Good work as usual though.


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NextGen
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:20 pm     Reply with quote
its a wandering EYE. not crossed.
Imperfections add character.
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Aber
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:44 pm     Reply with quote
A very nice portrait. I am not sure if she is cross-eyed, this could have to do with the reflection and color of her eyes.

Getting some early inspiration from Lord of the Rings?

I think the shadow below her neck could use some more blending, it just seems to cut off too sharply and at a bad angle.

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Radiater
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 12:44 am     Reply with quote
Hey Raist,

Wanted to add one quick crit: her right ear looks pasted on. The transition is too quick, perhaps just a couple strands of hair overlapping it at the bottom.
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