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Mindsiphon member
Member # Joined: 24 Mar 2001 Posts: 446 Location: Nashua, NH
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 10:42 am |
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This is a race portrait for an elven female.
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Liser Studios member
Member # Joined: 14 Oct 2001 Posts: 215 Location: Butler, PA
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 11:34 am |
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the drawing and CG are really really good... but there's one huge problem...
she's cross eyed!
lol
unless you want her to be crosseyed, but i was guessing you didn't.
other than that, very nice pic. nice indeed. |
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root88 member
Member # Joined: 09 Jan 2001 Posts: 194 Location: Wilmington, DE USA
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 5:52 pm |
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Her eyes were the very first thing I noticed too. |
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Cicinimo member
Member # Joined: 03 Mar 2001 Posts: 705 Location: Seattle
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:04 pm |
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I always appreciate your color choices raist :-). I have to agree with the others, however. Her eyes are a crossed. And I also think her ears would look better more pointy . Good work as usual though.
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NextGen member
Member # Joined: 24 Apr 2001 Posts: 149
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:20 pm |
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its a wandering EYE. not crossed.
Imperfections add character. ![](images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif) |
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Aber member
Member # Joined: 20 Dec 2001 Posts: 140 Location: The border
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Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2001 7:44 pm |
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A very nice portrait. I am not sure if she is cross-eyed, this could have to do with the reflection and color of her eyes.
Getting some early inspiration from Lord of the Rings?
I think the shadow below her neck could use some more blending, it just seems to cut off too sharply and at a bad angle.
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Radiater member
Member # Joined: 09 Mar 2001 Posts: 331 Location: Vancouver, B.C.
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Posted: Sat Dec 22, 2001 12:44 am |
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Hey Raist,
Wanted to add one quick crit: her right ear looks pasted on. The transition is too quick, perhaps just a couple strands of hair overlapping it at the bottom. |
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